Feb
20th
2015
Changeling Teacher Featured · 1:40pm Feb 20th, 2015
By all of the Gods of Asgård... I had no idea this would reach... That level...
I know it is not much compared to many much better stories on Fimfiction, but I am still stunned.
Its mind-blowing for me. 
However, i have also seen the storm of comments.
I wish to assure you all, I read every single one of them, and take them up to consideration, especially those of you who don't enjoy the story, or think I did Twilight wrong.
I am so grateful for all of your input, and I will try my hardest to internalize it all.
You wrote:
i Have (prädicat(?) should not be capitalised and I gets always capitalised in this form)
Especially (after a comma)
I Wish (Again, prädicat(?) capitalised)
Those are what is 100%ly wrong. Some people write capitalised after ... and some people don't. I guess both is okay.
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Thanks for that, Keep missing those
we get snugglez?
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You all get all of the Snuggles! Im still trying to comprehend everything right now!
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As someone whom saw lots of errors in your story, I wish to give you one, huge advice:
Read the story out-loud, then look in a book to see if it falls under "War Crimes".
If 1. It sounds like a poorly written fairy-tale, that's because it is. 2. If it turns out that molesting and subjecting a prisoner to something that may be worse than torture is indeed a war-crime, that's because it is.
Even by Human's fucked up standards, Twilight would be considered a criminal.
Med vänliga hälsningar från Sverige.
i'm shocked that you didnt expect this....
you have a very good thing going...