OC's I have chosen · 5:51am Feb 15th, 2015
Hey, it's Colt. Let me just say that this is the VERY FIRST BLOG POST i have ever posted EVER. So yeah, just wanted to point out that this is my first time doing this. Anyway, I posted some threads asking members for their OC's for a future fic I'm writing called the "New Guard Order". Well, I've finally decided which OC's i want to use as main cast members and/or supporting cast. With that said, here are the OC's:
Unicorns:
Shira Blitz (Mare)
Selune Darkeye (Mare)
Short Fuse (Stallion)
Grassy Fields (Mare)
Tacitus (Stallion)
Pegasai:
Artemis Featherclaw (Mare)
Chill Wind (Stallion)
Spinout (Stallion)
Earth Ponies:
Iron Sted (Stallion)
Khaddice Corset (Mare)
Flash Cache (Mare)
Terra Lionmane (Stallion)
Zebra:
Amber Belle (Stallion)
Other:
Starsabre jr. (colt)
So these are the chosen characters. Thanks to all of the members for the great suggestions, and I hope i got their race and gender right. If you want to send me a pic of what your OC looks like or want to give me any other information about your OC's then i would appreciate it. As for the ones who's OC's I haven't listed, I may add your's in later as a cameo or new recruits, depending on how the story goes, but I won't make any promises. The new fic will be come out soon, as well as other chapters for my other fics. Thanks for the help.
It is awesome seeing my OC on the list. I will be looking forward to your story.
Cool thanks
2798254 Your welcome. Although I'll admit, I'm still a little confused about how your OC acts and looks. So if i have any concerns I'll let you know.
2798261 well i don't have any art of him sorry. And personality wise he's like a mixture of Kaine scarletspider miles morales ultimate spiderman and tucker from red vs blue. And he's a bit of a nerd
2798274 Ok thanks. I think I'll have be the narcissist of the group, since you mentioned he can get pretty selfish and times.
2798285 yeah he can pull a vegeta at times and screw over everypony else for the sake of fighting a bigger challenge. Unless say someone was injured and bleeding out he would try his hardest to safe them
2798294 Yeah, he would fit that roll perfectly. I was thinking he could also have trouble getting along with some of the more obnoxious and insane members of the prog. Since there will be some, but I won't say who
2798302 yeah and he'd most likely be flirting with the saine mares (and when one of the crazy one's ask whe he doesn't flirt with them he says "my dad always told me to never stick my dick in crazy"). And twilight would not like sending him in because he's the son of a mare whos species nearly destroyed her family and a stallion who openly insulted her mentor and brother and he's inherited a lot of that from his dad Crescent
2798330 Ok, I may have some of the OC's have something against him or his parents in the fic.
2798363 ok yeah starsabre would have very few friends
2798380 That all depends on his development and how the fic will play out
2798363 Just as information or something you can use in my OCs. Each has an animal companion. However only to Terra is it important.
Selune has a raven named Akane.
Terra has a phoenix named Fenix
Extremely optional to Artemis who has a wolf named Lykos. Supposedly its sentient and can talk after a druid cast the "Awaken" D&D spell on him.
Yay! I got chosen! Awesome. I can't wait to read this. If you need any info. on Tacitus, all you need do is ask and I will gladly offer any help I can.
I hope I didn't ask too late, sorry I didn't see your thread before. I guess that's what I get for not checking the group thread everyday. Anyway, I'm glad to see someone putting our group to work. It makes me happy to see someone could use it for what it was intended for.
2798619 Good to know. But just to be clear, so i get the personalities right, Selune is the playful childish one, Terra is like a noble knight, and Artemis is the lawful moral compass. Did i get those correct?
2798754 That would be very much appreciated
2798989 Yeah, sorry i didn't see your OC back there, i guess it's just bad timing. But anyway, I'm glad you feel that way, but i can't say for sure when the actual first chapter will be published. Soon i hope.
2799069 I look forward to reading it. Better luck for me next time.
2799069 Selune is the playful smart one. Terra is the righteous serious one calm and stuff, and Artemis is the independent widlcat that values nature.
http://worldofequestria.com/page/character_database.html/_/artemis-featherclaw-r319
http://worldofequestria.com/page/character_database.html/_/selune-darkeye-r317
http://worldofequestria.com/page/character_database.html/_/terra-lionmane-r318
There is a personality bracket for each you should check.
2799116 Ok, I'll re-check them. Although i can't help but think that Artemis sounds a little similar to Ishimaru from Dangan Ronpa. Both follow and highly respect the rules and law. The only difference i can spot between the two is that Artemis believes to express that through action than reason.
Also, any quotes from your OC's you want to give so i can get a better idea of how they should act?
2799129 Well she is self-disciplined. You could say she follows her own code and stuff. However if laws get to bind get to bind her from doing what she thinks is right she won't hesitate to break them. Right over Law. So... no "Lawful stupid" tropes. This is more something that Terra might be conflicted in beeing. If you wish for a character that fits her then Valygar Corthala from Baldur's Gate 2 fits only a little more... chaotic.
http://baldursgate.wikia.com/wiki/Valygar_Corthala
Phrases
"I have stamina and patience, but both are wearing thin. It is time to rest." (when getting tired).
"I left all this noise and crowds for very good reasons. I'm beginning to remember them." (when in a city). ((ESPECIALLY THIS))
"So be it! I am your doom!" (battle cry) ((I guess it fits))
"I shall make this quick for you..." (battle cry)
Terra's the goodie is like a paragon Shepard, and only unless rules disrespecting life will he go against them. He likes reading knightly novels like Artorigus and the Noble Knights ((Artorigus is the name of Arthur in ancient English)). He is like Keldorn Firecam from the same game. http://baldursgate.wikia.com/wiki/Keldorn_Firecam
"I shall do everything in my power to keep this group safe and on the path of right." (when made leader of the group)
"By the maker, I shall strike you down!" (batlecry)
"Listen to the Lion's roar!" (battlecry) ((actually roars sometimes))
"Our resistance has not been for nothing. Even if the situation is grim we won't give up... and our friends... won't say we abandoned them!"
"Fenix to me!" *whistles* (phoenix descends upon his extended hoof)
"Ready and able!"
"I shall fight with honor!" (when in a duel)
"It's done! Victory goes to us!" (him and Fenix) ((wining))
"I'm sorry... I have failed you." ((defeated))
Selune is the playful smart type never keeping grudges or otherwise to keep her down. Her little "blush" on her nose (that you might see in some of her pics) is from Akane her little Raven. She has a fire in her eyes when she's with friends and a smile and kind word for everyone. She's ((almost)) like Imoen the Bhaalspawn from the same game. http://baldursgate.wikia.com/wiki/Imoen She loves Luna very much and her dream is to catch a glimpse/attention of the Night Princess ((who she owes her life to if you read her story.))
Phrases
"Aww, come on. I'm not cut out for leadership stuff."
"I'll stick by you no matter what, but we should still try to be decent to people." (when reputation is low)
"I'm weak enough without my wounds. Someone give me a hand over here please. (when injured).
"I'm getting sleepy. Wish we could stop for a bit." (When tired)
"I wish I could spend more time in the forest. It feels so alive." (when in a forest)
"Now I remember why travelling with you is such fun" (when reputation is high)
"Now you see me, now you don't" (when hidden in shadows ((whether she uses magic or not)))
"Shh, its set and ready to go" (when successfully set a trap)
"Such a beautiful night!"
"Onwards! Let us chase the wild enchantress dancing in the night! The one they call adventure!" ((Terra could also use this))
Selune and Terra are friends btw and she helped him raise the phoenix he has. Also they are protagonists in my newest story "Quest for Knowledge".
2799186 Thanks for the info. I should have the first chapter up soon.
2799231 Neat! Can't wait!
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Hey everyone, i just posted the first chapter of the fic. If you want to take a look at it, here you go. I hope I got everyone's OC right and I hope you like it
2800651 not to sound like an ego manac but where's starsabre
2800703 Did you read the authors note at the bottom of the chapter? He'll get his entrance
2800705 oh sorry force of habit to skip authors notes
2800708 Yeah. Other than that, what did you think?
2800720 i like it
2800725 Cool thanks
2800735 just thought of something funny when Starsabre shows some of the ponies go
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i was really hoping you would use my OC for the team's butt monkey but i respect your decision not to. good luck with your story.
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2798242 Hey everyone, I know it's been a while, but I've Finally uploaded the next chapter of the New Guard Order. I'm really sorry it took me a while to upload it, I've just been really busy with school and other stories lately. So if you're still interested, go on ahead and check it out. Thanks.
3127484 trust me, no one knows busy like I do, so I understand completely
I just read it and...how do I put this...I LOVED IT!
3127484 awesome.
3127528 It's alright, and I hope the new chapter is to your liking. If you've read it yet.
3127533 loved the emo insult from Sabre
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2798989 Hey everyone! I finally got a new chapter out. Here you go. Hope you like it.
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Couldn't help but think
Although if she did do that Starsabre would instantly crush on her