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BIGBLACKINTOSH


Sup, names [youcanread]. I love role playing games and fantasy stories. My best pony is Rarity and I hope you like my stories.

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  • 417 weeks
    So I just got a confidence boost with my writing...

    So, call me a weeb all you want when I tell you this, but its truely made me moreconfident in my work for the distant future.

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  • 425 weeks
    What are charaters: Part 2

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  • 425 weeks
    What are characters...

    With the eventual move to...Somewhere (docs only, wattpad, etc) coming to Smokeless, I'd thought I'd finally get down to talking about characters. Characters that I, after spending 2 years working on them, find important. This is generally just something I was going to just keep to docs, but, fuck it, whats the harm in letting you guys in on the new plot points and character designs. We're

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  • 426 weeks
    Eyup moving the story

    Well, I kinda settled it with restarting Smokeless and moving the revamp somewhere else. Mostly doing it lazy as possible and going to rework the chapters I've put out. I mean, theres not that much to be redone, but theres a bunch of mistakes and plot point that I never planned on retouching. Like, for example; what the monkey hell is Tick, Boom and whatever the fuck that thing traveling with

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  • 430 weeks
    tfw you realize you have no idea how to write two realistic adults

    Yaaaaay. Its a funny thing when I can write two semi-realistic people about to fuck for hours on end....Yet I can barely get two paragraphs in on characters I've had in my head for two years. Fucks sake.

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Feb
13th
2015

Idea... · 3:19am Feb 13th, 2015

SO one thing I have alot of trouble setting up is back story. Cause, its to my understanding that people who read would want to know about this type of stuff through clever placement in the story. You know, to have it integrated. But heres the thing, I've tried shoeing in character back stories in drafts and every situation I put characters in don't really call for "this one time at summer camp" talk. So one approach I have is to simply make blog posts about certain characters. It would be more food for thought about how someone talks and acts, but less involved in the story. Opinions?

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That's honestly something I've been thinking about for trapped. It's will most likely be able to clear up details on characters, and create insight on the world at whole. Me, I have time to create these "what the fucking was that" moments, but I feel as if a bestiary would be something to help keep ideas rolling with new ways to fucking with the main 6, maybe a location guide to help organize areas f or future chapters...

anyjew, it's a good idea, especially if you can't think of a spot to put in a bit of lore you want to get out.

Any chance you'd wanna bounce ideas on the gdoc for the next chapter?

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sure, don't see why not. and sorry it took me a bit to reply, didn't get a reply note so I never thought to check back till now.:derpytongue2:

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permissions permissions permissions.

Edit: your settings prevent me from entering your doc, unfortunate, but I will find a way through... or not... ill just wait for the email saying im allowed to look at words and ill help out :pinkiehappy:

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