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BIGBLACKINTOSH


Sup, names [youcanread]. I love role playing games and fantasy stories. My best pony is Rarity and I hope you like my stories.

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  • 415 weeks
    So I just got a confidence boost with my writing...

    So, call me a weeb all you want when I tell you this, but its truely made me moreconfident in my work for the distant future.

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  • 423 weeks
    What are charaters: Part 2

    Didn't want to overwhelm people (and myself). Now, "What the monkey fuck is Curse power?" You might be asking. Curse power is something of a thingy I made up after finishing Jojo's Bizarre Adventure: Diamond is Unbreakable. See, there are alot of fucking powers in the original Smokeless. People that can just, do shit, some have powers, some don't and its really not even close to clear

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  • 423 weeks
    What are characters...

    With the eventual move to...Somewhere (docs only, wattpad, etc) coming to Smokeless, I'd thought I'd finally get down to talking about characters. Characters that I, after spending 2 years working on them, find important. This is generally just something I was going to just keep to docs, but, fuck it, whats the harm in letting you guys in on the new plot points and character designs. We're

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  • 424 weeks
    Eyup moving the story

    Well, I kinda settled it with restarting Smokeless and moving the revamp somewhere else. Mostly doing it lazy as possible and going to rework the chapters I've put out. I mean, theres not that much to be redone, but theres a bunch of mistakes and plot point that I never planned on retouching. Like, for example; what the monkey hell is Tick, Boom and whatever the fuck that thing traveling with

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  • 428 weeks
    tfw you realize you have no idea how to write two realistic adults

    Yaaaaay. Its a funny thing when I can write two semi-realistic people about to fuck for hours on end....Yet I can barely get two paragraphs in on characters I've had in my head for two years. Fucks sake.

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Mar
9th
2016

What are characters... · 4:57am Mar 9th, 2016

With the eventual move to...Somewhere (docs only, wattpad, etc) coming to Smokeless, I'd thought I'd finally get down to talking about characters. Characters that I, after spending 2 years working on them, find important. This is generally just something I was going to just keep to docs, but, fuck it, whats the harm in letting you guys in on the new plot points and character designs. We're going to be talking about descriptive details and otherwise major details of everyone's character. Lets start with the primaries shall we?

Jann De'em
Age: 25
Height: 180cm
Hair color: Black (highlighted with gold dye)
Eye color: Hazel
Personality: Headstrong, skeptical, short-tempered, entitled and mostly unstable. Jann is someone who puts other people before herself but not without her getting something out of it. Her ego thrives off of getting rewarded after completing a task for someone, moreso than most people. This leads to the borderline hatred of leaving jobs she considers unfinished. She's generally weary of everyone she meets, no matter how friendly she seems, until they've proven she can trust them completely.Fighting is one of her few passions, it being the only way to truly know herself in her amnesia. She also loves food, cats, and being on top in bed.
Curse Power: Undecided

Nathaniel Crowe
Age: 25
Height: 185cm
Hair color: Dark brown
Eye color(s): One violet, the other solid red
Personality: Cold, Cool,(Almost) Carefree, passive-aggressive, and relentless when given direction. Nathaniel is the most even headed of the group, often making the plans and rushing into them along with Jann when they've been decided. Nathaniel loves fighting as much as Jann and when they meet, they quickly find a kinship in the career of bloodshed. After being given a hard life on Teros, being made harder because of the Curse laid upon him, Nathaniel has found a way to make light as much as he can, becoming deathly serious when he has to, but always trying to keep a smirk on his face. Even as he's murdering someone.
Curse Power: The Murderer

Nightheart (To be renamed. Thinking Thomas Night)
Age:22
Height: 187cm
Eye color: Side slided. Green.
Personality: Irritable, brash, frank, curious, impressionable, and easy to influence. After living so long under his mother's thumb, Thomas has found himself being constantly lost, even with the guidance of Crowe and Jann. Years younger than them, he finds himself drawn to follow them, thinking that two people older than him and that were willing to help him, would be able to help him make sense of the world outside of Ashpeak. Because of ridicule from his mother of his upbringing, Thomas is sensitive about his halfbreed nature, this irritability getting him into trouble when people make note of it. When confronted with fighting and killing, Thomas goes along with the situation until he develops his own morals, of which he's not sure of.
Curse power: None
Inherent power: Dragon strength

This is part one of, I don't know how many parts explaining some narrative changes I'm going to be making. For the most part; things are untouched. This universe retains alot of animal elements. Magic is still as I've described it. Its just alot of things that have really, really bugged me, are being changed. Such as characers, names, places, and most important of all, pacing, my mortal fucking enemy. Anywho, to the next part.

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