Just updated Headless, would appreciate some input to see if it's going in a better direction.

Also my throat is fucked...send a medic!

FUCK! SEND A PACE MAKER!

Also...today I saw a human penis in a horses' nose.... I don't know what the fuck I'm doing with my life....

Comments

[Exsort Beat]

I don't know what the fuck I'm doing with my life....

Neither do we!

[Mother3Forever]

[Fayte]

I actually like the direction headless is heading in. Rebuild and stuff is always interesting.
On another note, Fetlock made me kinda hungry with the latest chapter...

[fastbreak333]

To be honest, I thought the story would end with the after Cosmic and Dust became two whole ponies. I didn't expect it to continue, so at this point, I have no idea where this story will take me. I just hope that Jason will be a more reliable narrator now that he has a family to care for, but I doubt it. XD

[Sir Hat]

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He'll be more reliable because he's actually asking shit now, instead of trying to fix a broken body like a drunk mechanic fucking a tail pipe.

[fastbreak333]

2687769 I figured. Good luck writing!

[LeafBug]

in a horses' nose

That's pretty fucked up, since they don't breathe through their mouths.

[Sir Hat]

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I couldn't help but laugh at the sheer balls of it, but it was just like "HAHAHAH- wait...why?"

[Aerigim]

To be honest, I never have been able to get a firm grasp on how I feel about most of your stories. The way I see it is that they are well thought out that have always stood out to me more for the fact that each one has a part of a much bigger world to it most of the time. The characters are fairly down to earth with each having wonderful quirks that make them a treat to learn about and with Jason finally having a moment to sit down and let those he cares about get to know him shows that you know how to let a character grow. I feel as though if I try to say anymore I'll get even more side tracked.

tldr: I think the story is going well.

[the_sane_maniac]

You saw WHAT?!

[Iron Sky]

All I can say is please don't put the nose thing into one of the Able/Celestia stories.