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Budget_Player_Cadet


Expat American brony living in Germany. Occasionally, I write smut or read something that isn't smut.

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  • 311 weeks
    For anyone wondering what I've been up to lately...

    So... First of all, sorry I haven't put out much material lately. I've sorta drifted away from the Pony fandom as a whole, largely because I feel like I suffered my way through season 7 instead of enjoying it. Instead, I've been focusing on a different passion of mine: erotic hypnosis. If you read my story,

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  • 351 weeks
    On shitty ideas and obnoxious people

    The following list of PMs came after quite a few PMs from this same guy.

    I did think of another idea that might be fun, and it fits more in line with how you'd think the characters would act.

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  • 373 weeks
    Looking for proofreader/editor

    So I finally got my latest fic ready for editing. But my go-to editors are too busy/unreachable, so I might as well call out here. Trixie/Starlight clop, heavy focus on hypnosis.

    Thanks in advance,
    -BPC

    EDIT: I'm an idiot. I already made this post earlier and got a lot of responses. Sorry folks! XD

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  • 376 weeks
    The Human In Equestria Exposition Dump: Don't do it.

    Show, don't tell. This is writing 101.
    If you can cut it without taking anything away from the story, cut it. This is also writing 101.

    So why do I keep seeing HiE fics that start with entirely unnecessary exposition dumps, which frame the narrative in an inelegant way?

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  • 410 weeks
    Need a new editor

    I can't reach one of my old editors and the other one just doesn't have time.

    Any takers for editing and proofreading on the (nearly completed) last chapter?

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Dec
20th
2014

[DONE] Looking for an editor for chapter 2 of Play Me Like A Cello · 2:55am Dec 20th, 2014

So I've been working very closely with my editor/coauthor Laury on this chapter, and we're mostly done. I'm at the point where I think another pair of eyes checking for style, tone, pacing, writing, etc. would be prudent before we publish. Any takers? :pinkiesmile:

EDIT: set, thanks.

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Comments ( 7 )

Dear Budget Player Cadet.

I'd gladly take a look at the chapter before anyone els muahaha help. If you need any reffrences, I've posted all the work I am/have worked on on my home page. If not, I'm just as fine remaining a spectator.
Can't wait to hear from you.
Sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.

2665351 Same for me except for my credentials.

I'm available if you need any extra help.

I'd be glad and honored to be given a chance to help where I can, I loved the first chapter and would love to help see that the second one comes out just as great. I don't really have any references that you can look at to see any of my editing skills, but all the same I'd love to give it a try. If not, I completely understand and am looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Sincerely,
Die Pie

i have been editing for another writer on this site. If you need someone I can do it for you. If you would like a reference, you can ask Daybreaktigre14, I have been editing for his newest stories for a few months now.

Welp, if you want any more honest opinions about anything, or just a look-over to see if I can find any spelling/grammar issues, you know where to find me. Or you can just do things the fun way, meet a new editor, and discover the magic of friendship or something. My opinion on chapter 1 still stands, and I'll probably end up reading the chapter once it's published and comment again anyway. So yeah, hit me up if you want me for anything.

I'd help if I weren't staying with relatives.

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