Edit to What I've Become.

I've done a minor edit to the story. In chapter XI, Celestia and Luna receive a letter from Twilight. I removed it, since it was pretty unnecessary and only made Alex feel a bit Mary Sueish. As I've stated before, I'm trying to avoid that. You can learn about what happened in ponyville later.

Comments

[StarChaser01]

Alright, but I do like seeing what Twilight has to say about the "strange new creature" in HiE's that I enjoy. Oh well, it's not that big of a deal, I don't even know why I'm telling you about it, it's that small of a deal!

[Knight Breeze]

2588532 btw, don't know if you saw that there was a new chapter. The website was being weird and didn't notify some people.

[StarChaser01]

2588536 Sometimes it doesn't tell me that someone responded to me! This wasn't one of those times. And yes, I did see that, because I frequently (daily) check my tracking folder for new updates

[Cantankerous]

If this was just some new pony arriving to town and everypony else couldn't stop babbling about him that would be one thing, but this is Equestria's first encounter with alien life. It's kind of a big deal.

Could you actually post the text that was cut out in this comments section or something? I'd like to read it again so I can see how I feel about this change.

[Knight Breeze]

2589584 As requested, here's the portion of the fic that was removed:

Luna just nodded at this, her face still a mask of concentration. “Yes, though I would still like to know his name properly, if only-” she said, but was interrupted as a wisp of smoke flew in from a nearby open window, which then condensed and formed itself into a scroll. Celestia caught the scroll easily with her magic, then unrolled it with interest.

As she read, however, her eyes became wider and wider, until finally she waved her sister closer. “It seems that the Element of Laughter recently invited our friend to a party, though she caused a bit of a riot in ponyville as a consequence of that decision,” Celestia said dryly.

Luna just stared at her sister in disbelief for a second, then quickly leaned over to read over her sister's shoulder.

However, before either one of them were able to finish the letter, they were interrupted as the door to the throne room burst open, allowing entrance for Captain Steel Song. His expression was one of worry as he galloped to the twin thrones, and Luna felt the bottom of her stomach drop when she heard what he had to say.

Also, there was a slight glitch in the system, and you may or may not have been notified about the posting of the latest chapter. Sorry about that.