ToL update. · 3:52am Nov 6th, 2014
Chapter 3 is done, and I found my tablets limit on GDocs is 3,941 words before it starts freezing up. Yay for pushing the limits! Anyways this is where ToL and Golden Wings officially starts to split. This being the last fic where the main Golden Fics and the ToL sidequel will split off.
Now in last chapter, I asked what I should do shipping wise. And I want to say that Chapter 3's events aren't going to technically be how it plays out in the end nescessarily. But I've whittled it down to Spike X Other, and/or Spike Polyamory with Rares (after she fights for her love). But I can say that Rarity and Spike are going to both grow as ponies throughout this fic. Even when playing pen pals.
Also as those of you who've read the blog where I brought up the failed sidequel of Diamond Tiara. I bring forth Deets at the end of Chapter 3 where we see an interesting change since the GoldenVerse fic where Mango Dash threatens to wreck her marehood if she touches the CMC. For those of you who don't want to read the GoldenVerse fic where that takes place. Here's the short of it.
Deets sees the CMC added more to their ranks. And in a fit of jealous anger, bullies them and threatens to pull a "Babs". The original CMC are shaken from memories of the horrors Babs Seeds put them through, and Mango Dash propels herself into a push/headbut and threatens to do "Rainbow Dash's Marewrecker" on her if she hurts her friends.
They end up in detention, and Filthy finally caves, and says he's going to punish her and will get Deets to apologise to those she's wronged over the years.
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What I don't go over. We'll see in chapter 3, and in chapter 4. For a "what happened after she got in trouble". A lot of interesting things are coming up, and I can't wait for it to get polished up by Best Editor, and post it for you all.
