Oct
9th
2014
Opinions · 5:59am Oct 9th, 2014
Okay I'd first like to thank everyone for reading and commenting on my story in the "A New World, A New Way' world. It's much appreciated. I never thought I'd get around to making the Pokemon crossover I wanted until Zeus came up with his story....Then I read Ausbrony's and then Bubbas....You get the picture. (It's Bubba's that gave me the idea to ship a pokemon and pony...And I like writing Tsunderes.) Commander Sev has been a joy to write and follow.
I just wanted to take a moment of your time and ask:
Do you like my story and what aspects do you like/think I should elaborate more on/change? (Favorite characters/scenes/chapters.) I know I like what I have, but I'm the author. I'm biased.
I'm open to suggestions and comments of all types.
At first I hated Sev. I thought he was too full of himself, and I loathe arrogance. Even the PLA as a whole just didn't agree with me. And then he started to grow on me, and now this is my favorite story in the 'verse. It even gave me the inspiration to write mine.
(which has currently gone through 3 rewrites because I can't write :P)
Hmm, maybe a bit of back-story on how Flannery awoke in Equestria, and how she knows the PLA. More Tsundere Lightning is a plus because the personality you have going for her is my new headcanon. Any fic I plan on writing in the future with Dusty in it, she MUST be tsundere.
I'm curious as to how this Thirst character will affect things. Across all the New World fics, she scares the freaking crap out of me. Crazed religious zealots can be funny, like Sev. Crazed religious zealots with blood magic and probably Necromancy?
NOPE, miles and miles of Nope!!
I'd like to see more Gard too... I like him.
I love it so far, specially every bit with Sev on it!
I like how you can manage to keep so many different stories at a time and how they seem to be leading to one bigger story. Can't wait to get there in due time.
You've got men.
You've got the plot.
but where's the conflict?
That is my only compliant, but I can feel the plot rising soooo...I can deal with it.