Anyone want to proof read chapter 30 for me? · 2:17pm Oct 4th, 2014
Yup, the title pretty much tells it all.
Even though I just finished the chapter, (due to things going on in my life right now, chapter production is slow) I feel like I need to hear someone else's opinion on it before I start off on the next chapter. Well, come to think about it, anyone who'll be proofreading won't actually be pointing out grammar mistakes, they'll just give me an overall opinion on the chapter when they're finished reading it. So you know what that means? It means you don't have to be a wizard in english to help me out, just a constructive criticizer!
Also I have a question that I need to be answered before I begin the next chapter; would drinking milk from a breast/teat be NSFW? I can't really make heads or tails if it is NSFW or not. Can someone please give a reasonable explanation!?
Well that's all I got to say for right now. I'm sorry that I'm assaulting y'all with the blogposts; they're my only way of informing you guys about what's going on and how things are coming along.
i dont mind proofreading for you again
I am more than happy to proofread for you. And and it depends on who is feeding from who and if it's in a sexual context. But knowing your story, yes it would be.