For Those reading Luna's Dark knight I ask... · 11:37pm Aug 28th, 2014
Hello everyone... This is your resident Dark lord of the script reaching out to my loyal fans and Die Hard readers!
I am here today, asking you all a somewhat important question... How do you all like this story so far?
Cuz i'm dying to know!
This story is becoming one of my more favored stories, not just in the amount of people reading it, but also in that I love to write it!
This story took place when i had a thought about what would happen if a Dark Lord of the Sith, with different way of doing things, ended up in the not so perfect past of Equestria... More than five thousand years before the show even comes to light in their time. This character of mine, his name being well known now as Darth Corpus, has many secrets that he has yet to let loose on the world he has visited...
I have also twisted the histories of our favorite world, making it darker in his arrival than some might venture to do. Changing Celestia's perceptions to what might have been so many years ago, and molding the language barrier that we all see Luna having so many times in the show... and seeing as this is a long standing tradition, I guess I just went with it!
Now, give me your worst!, tell me what you think, for I will never think lesser of anyone of you for it. many of the coming chapters have already been written up, around twenty two of them to be exact XD So tell me what you think so far!
The story is an intense action/adventure compilation of everything good: Star Wars and MLP. You have been factually correct on everything Star Wars, which classifies as a big thumbs up for me because I get twitchy about that type of thing. Your fighting scenes are not only unique, but also better than anything that I have seen written. There is an intriquate level of detail and complexity in all Characters, showing creativity and devotion, and an ability to set yourself in the mind of each character. The structure and layout of each chapter is brilliantly done. Overall, you could not have done a better job, even if Lee Child and David Patterson had helped write it.
The story seem interesting and certainly looks like it'll only get better. I find myself wondering whatever happened the droid? Not sure if that's going to be addressed later on and i'm getting ahead of myself or what. However it seems like its slowly coming together so with high hopes I continue to read ever vigilant.