Aug
12th
2014
KHoH DANGIT!!! · 2:21pm Aug 12th, 2014
So I am kinda slacking on KHoH...
Not my fault...my mind tends to fly off the handle sometimes.
Also did not like what I had so far so redoing the chapter...Won't get rid of all that I had written...just most of it. It was basicly all over the place let me tell you what.
Anyway, yes it is still going on, yes there might be a KHoH sidestory to go along with it. Yes all of that and maybe more.
Thats all...back to the old grind!
I'm sure it'll be awesome! I love Kingdom Hearts to much to be a stickler for an update (especially considering I hardly update myself).
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I can always count on you Dale, to be my best friend...
Also, finally got to reading your latest chapters. Amazing as usual.
Hello, Steel Soul, new commenter here; LOVING your story so far. Especially with what you did with King Sombra (hell, I think you accomplished what the Season 3 premiere kind of failed to do with him. Hey, even some of writers admitted that). But moving on, have an idea for you to use for the future for this story; that is, of course, if you are open to them. Basically: bringing in Vanitas in this story and, well, having him possess Sora for a time being. Why? Well, you have stated that Sora will go Anti-form at some point in this story; not to mention the small moments of darkness that Sora seems to be showing so far. Who's to say that Vanitas isn't a, next stage for darkness for Sora
. Also, you've written Ven into this story; how do we KNOW that it's really Ven and not Vanitas impersonated him. (Well, YOU would know here; it's a plot twist is I'm getting at here.) Again, these are just ideas of mine for your consideration here. I know that this is your story and I'm sure you have a idea where you want to take this to next. That's all, and sorry if this came off as a rant
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Oh! Well thanks. Thats nice of you to say.
I have a few set Ideals that I have to put into the story, and King Sombra going monster is one of my best I think. Still there is a lot more to come and I hope I can get off my bum and make them happen.
I do have an Ideal for both actually. They have to come back. There is no other option at this point
2372337 So.... you ARE going to use Vanitas in this story some point; if I'm reading this correctly. Let me reiterate something here; I'm suggesting having Vanitas possess Sora at some point. And also, dare I say, have Vanitas say he's going to kill the Mane 6 just for the sick amusement/ express HIS, not Sora's, hatred towards them. A little dark I know, (although, Sunset STABBED Sora multiple times in one chapter; so yeah, I think this would more tame than that). That's all.