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ocalhoun


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Jun
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2014

Pre-readers wanted for "A Mother's Love Never Dies" [closed] · 10:29am Jun 11th, 2014

I've just finished writing and doing my initial editing passes through my next story, A Mother's Love Never Dies, and now I'll be looking for pre-readers!
Edit: Thanks for the overwhelming response, guys! I have plenty of willing prereaders now.

It's sad, dark, and bittersweet, following Chrysalis immediately after the events of A Canterlot Wedding.
It's a complete one-shot, coming in at around 6500 words. I think it will be borderline between 'everyone' and 'teen' ratings.

This one's going to be special, and I want to put the full effort into making it perfect!
For now, I'm mostly looking for feedback on which scenes worked, which ones didn't, and how you feel as you read through it.

If you'd be interested in helping out, reply here or send me a PM! ^.^ Thank you!

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I'll willing to be a pre-reader like before :twilightsmile: :heart::heart:

You're an amazing writer and its a joy to help in any way XD

I am willing to be a pre-reader :pinkiehappy:

It makes me happy that I am doing something for a good cause :pinkiehappy:

I'd love to pre-read for you.

I'll be looking for pre-readers!

Sit's head off of hands.

6500 words

Smiles.

looking for feedback

"Shit."

Sure, why not, I'll bite. I can give it a once over if you want.

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Wow, you guys don't disappoint! :rainbowkiss:
I'll be PM'ing you all the link!

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Yeah, giving some detailed feedback is the cost of an early preview. :ajsmug:

Darn, missed it. Oh, well. I'll get to see it when the curtain rises. :pinkiehappy:

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Yeah, sorry. :twilightblush:
But I already have 7 people taking a look at it... I can't in good faith ask even more to work on it!

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