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Arwhale


All my stories end with the word "gullible." No really, check them out!

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  • 93 weeks
    Unreal.

    Hello all. Like always when I make posts on here these days... it's been a while, eh?

    I do not even know where to begin, exactly. I know it has been an eternity since I posted a piece of writing on here, and that even includes blog posts... but that's okay.

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  • 136 weeks
    MLP Gen 5 Movie: A Review (but only sorta since like half this review is gonna talk about Hitch Trailblazer lol)

    To be honest, prior to watching the MLP Gen 5 movie, I had literally ZERO hype for it. I walked into it with virtually no expectations... and honestly, I was actually expecting it to be kinda, well, bad.

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  • 157 weeks
    Semester is Over LMAO

    Quote from my last blog: "However, the semester is starting back up, and it's looking busy as always, soooo I will have limited time to work on it. The thing, though? I am still gonna keep working on it. I'll make time."

    ....

    Ha. Hahaha, hahaha. Hooheeha.

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  • 175 weeks
    Chapter 2 Posted!

    Hey y'all. I managed to post the 2nd chapter of my niche passion project in a semi-reasonable time frame! WOW! Granted, it's not the "BIG ONE" yet, but I already have a start on that one and it's going well. This chapter is sort of the calm before the storm... and it'll be a storm for sure.

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  • 177 weeks
    NEW STORY: B(e)aring It All

    by Arwhale

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May
10th
2014

I'm writing a new oneshot from today's episode. · 3:13pm May 10th, 2014

I know I said I would have everything else updated by Sunday, but that didn't happen because one of my close friends came by to visit on Thursday. We haven't spoken for over a year since he moved to Turkey, but he dropped by completely by surprise (and it was most welcome!), and therefore, I didn't have time to write much of anything. He was also visiting some family in the area and had to leave last night, so I guess I can start writing stuff, now. I was really glad to see him, though!

So... I'm going to have Rotten Apple updated soon (still probably by Sunday). But after today's episode, I need to write a new oneshot. I get the feeling that someone else might beat me to it, since I think other people will want to write the same thing, but I'm gonna try to be VICTORIOUS. So there.

Sorry to people who are waiting and stuff.

Oh, and I hated the finale. Not a joke. Don't know if it's just because something was wrong with me or what.

Oh well.

~Arwhale~

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Comments ( 2 )

Why didn't you like the finale? I rather liked it, and thought it a fitting end to the chest story arc

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When you hear my reasons, you'll see why I feel like there's something wrong with me for not liking it. I feel like I'm just... jaded, or something. :twilightoops: Or just a big flaming asshole.

The biggest issue with me was the pacing, especially with the first half of the finale. It improved in the second half, though, and the fight was the best, most epic confrontation we've seen in this show EVER, so that was awesome. But with the first half, so much happened, and yet with the way they presented everything, it just felt like... not much happened.

I guess it's because I pay WAYYYYY too much attention to "exposition" dialogue. The first half was filled with it to the point where it got obnoxious and dragged on and on, particularly with the Princesses talking to Twilight. I was also kind of miffed when Lord Tirek's takeover of all the pegasi and earth ponies was just confined to a quick little montage and more heavy narration from Celestia about what was going down. It felt cheap, I guess.

Jeez Louise, I feel like those things shouldn't have bothered me as much as they did, but... yeah. There was more to it than that, including some random parts with the writing itself, but other than that, the episode was good, I suppose.

Maybe I should just make it a policy to shut up and keep my opinions to myself.

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