So here's my predicament... · 10:14pm Apr 30th, 2014
First off, I apologize that this story is taking forever to update. For that, you can blame a combination of work, school, and Dark Souls 2.
NOW.
The next chapter may or may not be typed up. I usually have a guy I bounce ideas off of and ask opinions of, but as it is he's extremely busy and indisposed atm.
I typed up a lot of the chapter over the course of the last few days, and I really need an editor/pre-reader to look this over and give an opinion on what further ideas I have for this chapter. I'm too much of an inexperienced writer to trust my own opinion. I don't know if what I've already created is too long, I'm not sure if I should keep my chapter lengths consistent, and there's just a whole mess of dueling ideas in my brain keeping me from being confident in my own decision-making concerning this story right now.
So...is there anyone who'd be willing to look over what I've typed up so far? I really need an editor to smack me and say "NO" in case I fucked up and did something stupid.
so...will you smack me? 
I wish I would smack your face straight from your screen but then I need to be Pinkie Pie and I don't have the cupcakes to do it!
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I will take that smack
I will take it so hard
oooooookaaaay I need to stop with the innuendos now haha, you saying you wanna be an editor or are youa ctually gonna smack me?
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Actually the latter seeing I don't know how to be an editor
(although if grammar checker, I could though but I am mostly busy with college though) How does editor work actually? 
I could be your editor. I've had a lot of previous experience, and I feel like I could help you.
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2065350 "Tales of Prince Onyx"
"Sweetie's Mansion"
"Bronze Hoof"
That's all I can think of off the top of my head. There are more, but their names escape me...
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I have read sweetie's mansion, 'twas good
if you wanna help I've definitely got no qualms, you got a skype?
2065593 Yeah, it's the exact same as my name on here.
If there's multiple lunarstallions for some reason, then look for Discord fiddling with a curly 'stache. Trust me, you'll know the picture.
ermahgerd derk serls
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*Puts on slapping glove*
Prepare thy face.
*Light slap*
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In all seriousness, I would offer to help, but I am not the best writer - or editor - in the world. As in, not a professional in any sense of the word.