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BronyDad


Loving husband and proud daddy of two girls

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  • 53 weeks
    Darkening Summary

    As I promised, here is a brief summary of The Darkening for anyone who would like to continue the story but would rather not spend the time reading the 69k word story again. Now if you haven't read the story, then please don't read this summary, it is going to cover all of the plot points very quickly, and you will get nothing from it but confusion and whiplash. You can catch the summary just

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  • 59 weeks
    The Darkening is Back!

    I told you it wasn't dead! Yeah, I saw it when those of you placed it in your "dead" and "graveyard" bookshelves, and I gotta say, each one of those hurt my heart a bit, but I get it. I haven't updated the story since April 2019!

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  • 164 weeks
    The Darkening isn't Dead, I Swear!

    So, I know I haven't really done anything here in nearly two years, but I just wanted to tell anyone who may still care that I haven't given up on The Darkening yet. The truth is, I've been in a bit of a funk since before posting chapter 7. My depression came back, harder than it has in over a decade, and with it came the old feelings of failure. Every time I sat down to write, this little

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  • 265 weeks
    The Darkening: Chapter 7

    Finally, it's done! This chapter gave me a lot of grief. I wrote the Twilight section over a dozen times easily, and honestly, I nearly gave up at one point. But I didn't, and thanks to a comment from my newer pre-reader, Zodiacspear, it turned out even better than I'd hoped. So look for chapter 7 to be posted next Wednesday around

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  • 278 weeks
    The Darkening: Chapter 6

    Chapter 6 is ready to go and will be posted next Wednesday. Chapter 7 has really given me a lot of trouble, but I think I've finally just about worked it out, and I'm hoping the next portion of it will come along much quicker. Anyway, I hope you all had a wonderful time over the holidays, and I also hope you'll look forward to chapter 6 after checking out the excerpt after the page break.

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Apr
15th
2014

I Love Fimfiction! · 2:51pm Apr 15th, 2014

So, even though I've only been a member here for three weeks, I'm really impressed with Fimfiction. Everyone I've interacted with has been extremely polite and helpful. Especially CatsWithGats, he's been running a fine tooth comb through my story, and the errors he's been uncovering have been enlightening, I've gone through my other works and found many of the same mistakes in them as well. He also has a very unique story that has caught my interest, and I've been helping him to improve it structurally. Check it out, I can't wait to see where it goes. Also, Platnium is currently working on an original coverart for my story that I am super excited about. She also has this adorable little short story. It needs a little bit of work, but it totally made me smile. And, if you're interested in seeing her art, here is her deviantart page.

I have just finished chapter four of the young adult novel I've been working on, and decided to set it aside for the moment. All the positive comments I have received on Love Your Difference has inspired me to pick my second MLP story back up, so I will be spending all of my efforts on completing it. The first two chapters have been done for about 8 months now, so I'll edit them, watching for the mistakes CatsWithGats has pointed out, and once I've decided that they are of good enough quality I'll post them. I just wanted to say thank you to my followers for taking the time out of their day to read my story, I really do appreciate it. And thank you as well for all the feedback and making me feel welcome here!

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You're so awesome, thanks for this!!!:pinkiehappy:

It's the least I can do. Also, if you're interested I could critique your story, there are a few things I noticed that could help improve your writing.

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