A crucial bit of information about The Child In Me!!!

This'll be an Authors Note in the second chapter, but I'd like you all to read it now and tell me if you disagree.

Well this story’s had mixed reactions XD

Might as well say what this story is going to be here and now, so pay attention private!

The Child In Me is a comedic, fun and (hopefully) adorable story that will make little to no sense. The characters will stay in their respective OOC roles; Oliver will alternate between a very intelligent guy, and a very innocent foal.

Why did I rush the first chapter? (Yes it’s obviously rushed)

Because for one, this story isn’t going to be driven on detailed environments, and two, we’ve all seen this shit before. Thus why I tried to make it straight to the meat of the story as smoothly as I could.

So here’s the gritty conclusion. If you’re here for spontaneous bouts of randomness, comedy and adorability, then by all means do stay!

If you’re here for an immensely detailed story, similar to something like Never Judge A Bug By Her Cover, then you’re wasting your time.

In any case, enough of that.

Begin!

Freedom B-B-Beach!

Yay for surprise title XD

Comments

[Submaniac93]

I'm staying! I don't care whether rushed or not, you write nicely, therefore I shall read thy story!

[FlyingMushroomxii]

Personally, I love this type of story