Changes in _All the Way Back_ · 5:36am Mar 5th, 2014
For structural reasons I've cut the Dunnich scene out of the end of Chapter 3 of All the Way Back, where you may have already read it, and am moving it to the front of Chapter 4. This way I end Chapter 3 on an ominous note and put the character development and exposition where it belongs, in the middle of a chapter rather than as part of its climax. This is just generally better technique, as each chapter should ideally start on a hook and end at a mini-climax / denouement where possible within the structure of the larger story. Nothing's been permanently cut -- even the Notes relevant to Dunnich and the fluffy pony have been moved to Chapter 4.
Making this plain here because otherwise when I publish Chapter 4 you'll all go "Hey! I read part of this already!"
