[2/18/2014] Future Tactics, And Thoughts · 7:23am Feb 19th, 2014
Initial impressions of people? Some appear to like it. Others, it seems are in the 'tl;dr' club.
Now, I'm going to continue to write Future Tactics, and I don't really give a shit at all whether or not you people agree that I should. This one is truly mine, something to finally call my own, that story that defines what I try to write.
I hath created my own universe, and think it grand.
I like it. Screw everyone who hates it, they can die in a hole.
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Khorne and I worked too hard on this to leave it by the wayside.
I enjoyed it also, please, continue.
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Thank you. You know, Future Tactics is the first story where I've received good comments like this. Most are a combination of "What the fuck did I just read?" and inane unintelligible comments.
I like it.
1856975 That sucks, it has great potential, the only thing i can criticise is that when the humans are talking, its hard to differentiate between them, perhaps give them a bit more character, give them their own lexicon and mannerisms
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Considering that most of them are dead now...(From the Kepler, I mean.) And I don't want to go over all 22 pages of writing. Seriously. I had enough trouble writing it, although it was pretty good.
I had the problem of "TOO MANY CHARACTERS". I made too many important characters. Although, Fireteam Asshole was fun to write.
1857961 No, I can agree with that, I'm not suggesting that you go back and change anything, just might help with future character building>
1859005 There's going to be a lot of characters in the future. I mean, the War Games are an entire GALAXY!
1859367 Absolutely spiffing, this one cannot wait old chap.