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  • 322 weeks
    Revamp 3: Revenge of the Vamp

    Okay, Last of the TSW series revamped. I changed the focus of Golden Bit's plot, so it hopefully makes a little more sense, but try not to expect miracles, here. Anything more intensive would have required practically rewriting the whole story, and I'm definitely not doing that. I was going to do more with the final chapter, but honestly, I just want to move on to newer stories. I'd rather

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  • 342 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening part 2

    Okay. So. I have come up with an alternate subplot for Golden Bit that I think will work. However, this is going to require a much more intensive rewriting of the story, especially the later chappies. The first few chappies are going to be just like the previous two arcs, with mainly just corrections, and updating the Equish to my new standard. Later on... well, it's gonna get different.

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  • 343 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening

    Okay, so I Would Do Anything for Love, the second story in the TSW series has been... adjusted. Mistakes corrected, Equish words updated, and Celestia's badassery scene lengthened. This is one of the original criticisms of this story that bugged me upon reflection. I gave her this grand build up, only for her to falter because the clock ran out. So now, she pushes on a little and... No. You want

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  • 344 weeks
    Slight revamp

    So, I was wondering whether to add another chapter to Amore Obbligato, or to a non-pony story I'm working on, when I decided, "You know what? This is as good a time as any to finally clean up TSW!" So, here we are, with me going through the story, correcting old mistakes that were missed, adding some clarifications, and generally making all the details and words used compliant with later sequels.

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  • 367 weeks
    Question for any Italian speakers out there

    So, in writing up my newest chapter of Amore Obbligato, I've run into a small problem with which I was hoping my readers can help. As you know, the story revolving around Octavia and Twilight, there's going to be a lot of musical terms, most of which are Italian in origin. That being said, I thought it would be cute if Octavia and her mother have cute little musical nicknames for each other. To

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Feb
16th
2014

New Story! · 3:19am Feb 16th, 2014

Dunno if you all have noticed, so I'm making an official announcement. THE NEW STORY IS HERE! GO READ IT! I guess they're still working out the bugs in the system, and merely attaching the "sequel" tag doesn't alert like it should, so we'll try it this way. As a side note, I GOT MY FIRST PIECE OF FANART! Go see it and praise the artist! Just PM me for a link. It looks fantastic and it's only in the sketch stages! I haven't been this excited since Princess Columbia made me a Pandora station! Seriously, go see it!

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...it doesn't bother me, but just so you know, it's supposedly* against the site rules to direct link to off-site NSFW content... (and I'm going to have to assume anything tagged "explicit" on Derpibooru counts as NSFW...)

(*The wording implies it, but doesn't actually expressly say it...)

PS: Just trying to make sure you don't get flagged.

PPS: Also, I just found it kind of funny that you would give us a link to the pic but not the story that this blog post is actually about...:applejackunsure:

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Thanks, forgot all about that. I fixed it now, though. I linked to my old story because I wanted to try to get all the people who faved it, but aren't following me to know about it. :twilightsmile:

1840005 No, I get why you tagged the message of the sequel/prequel to it's related "parent" story, what I meant was that you provided no link to the new story. Actually you didn't even mention the name of this new story, so to find it I had to go to your page and go through your stories to look for one you labeled as the sequel (and even then I was confused because the cover art looked so unrelated to TSW...)

I'm just saying that if you're trying to build hype for OftD it's kind of a lot of hoops to jump through... At first glance I had assumed that when you said "THE NEW STORY IS HERE! GO READ IT!" it would have been a hyperlink, but it was not.

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Well, color me chagrined. Second mistake fixed. Thanks for catching those for me. This is why I don't go making blog post willy-nilly. :twilightsheepish::facehoof:

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