What to do with True Sight? · 12:51am Jan 24th, 2014
I haven't thought much of this story lately, I'll be honest. At first it seemed like such an exciting concept, then it came out and it was still fun to write but got very little attention. So I kept writing it and making it more and more complex, until I soon realized that I had with me a story that was a tad too complex for its own good with too much foreshadowing. I also wrote myself into a wall and I don't know if people find this annoying, but taking back chapters and rewriting them into something completely new seemed rude. So my solution was to re write the damn thing, and now I'm still not sure if I should. I love the idea of what I did, but it just takes too much work to make it believable. Would you believe I even wrote an ending for it to see if I could help move my self along? It did not really help at all.
So now I'm still debating on if I should re write it into something brand new, cancel it, continue it (really feel like its the wrong move) or end it early and move on. As Beavis would say: "Thinking Sucks!"
What do you all think?
Rewrite it, just from my viewpoint that dimention hopping is okay but it shouldn't be so extrem depressing. It should be more like crusaders adventure not world end senario. Only my oppinion you are the writer it is your Idea and I like this story.
It wasn't meant to be depressing, it was just mean to hop through either worlds I made up or to stories I enjoyed from the site. Like in Tangled Roots, one chapter would be about the bar they run and them popping in. That is a good idea though, just popping in but not making it all about fixing a broken world or something, huh. 1751314
I think I will and see where it goes, the other chapters will be made public so people can keep them if they want to.
Do what you feel is right, but whatever you do, it is a great idea, and I hope to read it, rewritten or continued. please don't end early or cancel, because it is worth reading, and I enjoyed the story. I kind liked the idea of dimension hopping and fixing worlds that will end up a mess and fixing them.