Clearing up Questions · 11:12pm Dec 10th, 2013
So these are a few questions that some people have asked/discussed in the comments for Reversal of Fortune, and I thought I'd take a quick moment here to clear them up. Mostly because I probably won't outright say their answers in the story.
First off: no, he didn't shoot Gummy, or Spike, or Steven. No, I'm not that cruel. You'll find out what he shot next chapter.
Second, Ryan did not just get a "debuff" on his luck. All he knows is that the little '+' sign by the 10 is gone. As a matter of fact, what's happening to his Luck is far worse than that, but he just doesn't know it yet, and neither do you.
Third and finally, he isn't a demigod. Atë thought he was because of his god-like luck, but he isn't. She's crazy.
That's it. The next chapter for that will be out a little while after I finish work on the next one for my other fic, Ungrounded. I hope this cleared some things up for you guys.
And I had Steven marked as dead.
Liking the story so far. Only criticism I can offer is to question yourself about "Is this important to the story?" The whole war-room thing felt more like something you just wanted to draw, than anything relevant to the story.
Looking forwarded to the next chapter.
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Everything is relevant, except for when I say it isn't relevant. You'll see...
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