A somewhat well known author, who is also well known for his inconsistent upload schedule. (My Patreon!)
"You'll wait here and be grateful that I find no cause for you to have an accident creature," she said, sneering.
I didn't know if it was instinct or a mixture of my newfound magic or...or something else.
Enjoy and as always, do let me know what you think!
Finally, fucking finally!
I've finally managed to find the time to re-read the entire story up until The Abandoned chapter.
As such I now have both the information, feel and motivation to continue the epic tale of Richard and Chrissy.
Here's a small sneak-preview -
"What in the hell is going on here?" I asked, eyes wide as I took in the frankly terrible sight.
Yet Another Story For Those Interested To Enjoy!
This time between a temperamental young man and a feisty Goblin who become friends with benefits and try to keep it that way.
Emphasis on try 
Hey everyone.
The third chapter is underway, but writers block has struck again.
Thankfully I managed to work it out by writing a little random drabble.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9659998/1/
Please, do read and tell me if you think I should throw it on here as well :)
Thank you. Love you all XD
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first comment.
Yes. Yes you should.
Please put it up here!
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Have you read it?
I'm only concerned because I don't wanna put up anything that'll...annoy or discourage my fans from reading anything else I upload
I loved the story and think that you should post it on this site.
1328169 Why would you think that? I thought it was nice.
Ok, but I really hope you can end your story in a happy form…I really just want Luna to suffer at this point
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It's different from my usual shiz XD
1328190 Maybe...but it's fun to mix things up.
Don't be afraid to try Livin' Like Larry
It was different, not really my taste but it was amazing, like all your work. You should definitely put it up here ^^.
You should definitely post it. It is a very cute story, and I am sure some will love to try to guess the references you put. Of which I only got three.
I swear this touches so heavily into another story. But never mind, this is like the simpler summery version.
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I see a lot of influence is all I can say. I mean concepts and all. I see it though as a heavily simplified summary of a basic concept of all the other stories in a simple single chapter. Having said that. It is a good idea to publish it considering its high speed and outline are simple. It makes the point without difficulty and is a nice and easy read.
Not bad, I liked it. But then again I'm a sucker for anything with Nightmare. It was a breath of fresh air after your latest Luna stuff.
Dear god I regretted reading that.
Put it in this page and it will go to the trending box right away
Caeruleus, wtf does it means!? google would only show me fish pictures
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Go to google translate and put that name in.
Translate it from Latin to English. IT should work then :)
I loved it, it's so you, but the feeling behind it...
While it was pony related it's more about the oneness of the two lovers, not about form, world, or destiny, but about two wishing to become one and embracing every aspect of life together.
Let me put it this way:
The Royal Break-up Chronicles= Pretty Smart
Nothing is Set in Stone-verse = Pretty Fuckin' Smart
What A Wonderful Life =
I think I saw some elements from Tamriel, AKA, the Elder Scrolls universe there. Also, you should do more stories like it.
1328313 Blue?
or Tenebrosus?
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Nope.
Type in Dark One (Remember to space it) And translate from english into latin XD
great story upload please
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Caeruleus:
—Of or pertaining to the sea.
—Of or pertaining to the sky.
—Of or pertaining to rivers or sea and river deities.
—Dark colored, dark blue, dark green, cerulean, azure.
—Gloomy, sable, black.
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...This is supposed to be "different"? How so?
Overt Similarities:
• Romance between a human and an alicorn
• Human is an ordinary guy, nothing special setting him apart besides being the only human
• Alicorn is an immortal goddess of the Sun/Moon/Love/Magic/Darkness and [future] ruler of a kingdom possessing extreme physical, magical, divine, and often political power
• Alicorn is a clingy lover and is mentally unstable to some degree
• Human cannot hope to measure up to his lover in terms of his overall merit, and thus cannot truly stand beside her as a peer and equal (yes, "What A Wonderful Life" still counts for this—after all, the ending was still all uniquely the result of Nightmare's powers and had little to do with the human other than the requirement that he be present for it)
• Human has basically no means of resisting/stopping the alicorn should she go insane (rather, given your stories, when she inevitably goes insane) and does something arguably immoral and unethical to him and/or others by abusing her powers
• Alicorn ignores/bypasses the human's mental/spiritual boundaries and does something irreversible to him without really asking his permission
Overt Differences:
• It's a short story/one-shot
• Involves implied world-hopping through more than two realities
No offense intended bro, but your stories have been kinda formulaic thus far. I'd really like to see something new from you, even if it still involves a human and alicorn in love. Especially if it does, since you seem to be good at that aspect.
...You know what, I think I have a prompt for you.
I challenge you to write a story about a human who has an alicorn as his love interest, just like the other stories you've written thus far... with the exception that the "human" is actually a legitimate "forgotten divinity" of some ancient human civilization that just so happened to reincarnate, in a physical form similar to the "divine alicorns", in the world of MLP. He doesn't have to remember who or what he once was (although I would recommend that he eventually start to remember, since the memories of his past self could conflict with his current self and thus be good for drama), nor does he necessarily need to have the exact same personality as his original self, nor does he need to be overtly divine in nature; but, he must retain his attributes, abilities, and skills as a human divinity—even if they are concealed from all and/or he doesn't consciously understand how to use them. He should not be just another ordinary man no matter how much he seems to be one on the outside, and thus would eventually measure up to your "divine alicorns" by the end. It would also allow you to delve into the rich well of human mythemes and lore. Maybe you'd even learn something interesting from it.
Personally, I would suggest using any of the following deities, not only because they're interesting, but also because they're relatively uncommon and under-exposed in western culture:
Mithra, Hesperus, Marduk, Akrasiel, Caelus, Verethragna, Karna (technically just a powerful demigod, but an important figure of adulation to millions of Hindus and Indians, despite being a tragic antihero, for his martial skill, courage, honor, morals, and perseverance), Ukko, Ninurta, Týr, or Zuo Ci (also not a god, but a wise sage and powerful magician who is revered in Taoism similarly to a divinity)
I know you have that story idea with the guy with the odd name I can't remember who is half angel or something like that, but... just think over this idea for a while, okay?