I finished writing my first pony story! · 2:38am Jul 28th, 2013
Actually it's an interview. I hope people like it. Hurry up submission board people!!!
"Of all the terrible batponies in the world, you're the least terrible."~PresentPerfect🐴Ponk & GlimGlam are best ponies🐴Text 714-496-3119 with the name of an MLP character to get a cute picture!
Actually it's an interview. I hope people like it. Hurry up submission board people!!!
So... did you end up submitting your story? I wouldn't mind giving it a read and critiquing it if you want![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
1267579 originally it was just a single chapter interview-style story which got rejected for various reasons. now it is this: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/120052/super-trampoline-the-bat-ponys-day-as-presented-through-various-writing-paradigms password is "2muffins" as you can see, it isn't finished.
What did they say in the rejection?
1273452 Your Story is Bad, and You Should Feel Bad.
Just kidding. The guy said it didn't really have a plot and that the interview style was kind of against the rules of not having stories in script format.
1276430 Argh. The rule against scripts is a bad rule. The show itself is written as scripts.
Plots are nice, but not always necessary. This is not that kind of story.
Funny how they claim approval is necessary to protect us from horrible self-inserts with no grammar, but I've never known a case where a story was rejected for being bad.