Come Back To Me Evil Spin Off (Yes another blog...forgive me) · 12:50am Jul 2nd, 2013
Tell me...you've read Come Back To Me right? Well what would you say to an Evil version of the story.
Title- Get Away From Me
Summary- A Spin Off from the original story.
What do you suppose would happen if after sending Crystal away as well as Luna to the moon, Celestia just...lost it? Well when Crystal Justice finds himself
sucked into Equestria by none other then Twilight Sparkle...he soon finds out just what a hell hole he's wound up in.
Unfortunately for him Celestia quickly discovers that he's arrived...as well as that fact that Twilight and her pathetic resistance are keeping him hidden from her.
Crystal/Chris has no idea who Celestia actually is...although flashbacks, dreams and Ghosts begin to do everything in their power to change this.
The real question here...is when she finds him and she WILL FIND HIM...will he stick with the resistance...or will he join the Solar Tyrant and crush any opposition beneath their joint rule?
If you thought that Celestia was a bit too possessive in Come Back To Me. Well this Celestia makes the Nightmare Moon look tame by comparison O_O
Okay so the idea is something like that. It may change...but what do you think?
Oh and don't worry. I am getting on with the other stories, this is just an idea that's been on my mind for all of about fifteen minutes :P
Okay I'm going to sleep. NO MORE BLOGS....for now XD
I really think you need to stick to one story at a time. I know this is just an idea but don't burn yourself out writing multiple stories. Would really hate it if you went fuck it and dropped writing stories all together.
Whoever invented waiting is an asshole.
I'm interested in it, but I think something big would have to happen in the story that gives him a view on ponykind that actually MIGHT give him the motivation to side with Celestia.
Just reading Come Back To Me tells you he has a working moral compass and won't side with a tyrant, so it would be a no-brainer on who he would side with, so that would need to come into effect.
Other than that, I think go for it, but work on Luna's story on the side, then make an evil one shot for her too.
I sense the becoming of a trend here :P
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I NEVER drop my stories...okay maybe the Luna one but I'm having second thoughts about that one. In fact I've thought of a few ideas for the second chapter.
Relax, I am capable of writing multiple stories at once.
Sounds kinda cool so I would like you to give it a shot. Though I must agree with JCraig that don't burn yourself out.
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A spin off means exactly that. A Spin off.
In this story Chris's life was NEVER affected by Celestia's parents, thus he actually has a slightly different moral compass.
And besides...Celestia is very capable of twisting and manipulating ponies in this story. Her ability to do so doesn't diminish with Chris. Oh and I suppose the fact that she can contact him mentally after a short time doesn't help him any
Sounds interesting, I said go forward, I want to see, if Chris will find love in the hands of the resistance…perhaps his guard, or even better, Luna. I want to see, how a Alicorn face the rejection
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He will already have a Human Girlfriend...and Celestia DOESN'T like that one little bit
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Ah so in that story things DOES work with him and…that girl?
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She...get's taken care off
And I'm not saying how. No more spoilers!
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Geez, that turn dark…but continue please
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Well, you got me interested now. I have my hopes on how this story would go, if you even write it.
I want you to write it.
And also make Chris into a tyrant.
There are way too little "Average Guy goes into Equestria and gets corrupted, turned evil, etc".
Just my hopes and dreams here.
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Hehe, we'll see
Solar Flair and crystal? sounds like an awesome story but i want one of the other stories your working on in my opinion, its up to you though
...Why do you have so many interesting ideas? First the Immortal Lovers series, then the NMM what if, then the Nothing is Set in Stone series being worked on, and now this what if. Don't burn yourself out dude!
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I'm trying buddy, but my mind doesn't stop
I LOVE this idea. I was actually wondering what the story would be like if it took a turn like this.
dear gawd that sounds unbelievably awesome. please for the love of all things awesome DO IT>!!!!!!!!!!!
Sounds fun.
It sounds awesome!
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I like this idea, alot.
i would love a spin off since celestia is really creepy in the original one.
Mah thoughts:
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Clear 'nuff pardner?
Meh, again with the spin-offs. The NMM one was alright, but I wouldn't jump the gun with another story to work on.
I mean, you have Immortal Lovers, Chrysalis one-shot, Nothing Is Set In Stone, and Luna's part of Immortal Lovers, which I hope is still possible.
I know you said you can work on multiple stories at once but you're over working yourself and less is getting donue with everything else.
But, in the end, its your call.
if you think you can do it, but a tyrant Celestia story is just, Idk, I guess it only offers this one note villain from whom we know Exactly what to expect..
With NMM's story that plays part in Immortal lovers, it was interesting because that was one side of her we never saw in the show, it was something of an unexpected take on her character. With this, we'll have Tyrantlestia being, Tyrantlestia. To me, that's a yawn.
I hope I may be wrong, but these are my fears for this particular spin off.
Other than that, if you can handle writing the other stories as well for Immortal lovers, why not.
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Ahh but you see. The question with this Celestia is "Is she a tyrant...or is she simply refusing to smother her ponies from the harsh truth of reality?"
This question will be the premise of her being a "Tyrant"
The is she or isn't she will be the whole headache inducing plot, as well as a lot of other complicated stuff.
And if can't tell by all that I've just wrote, then yes I am about to write the first chapter
Chrysalis's story is sort of on a standstill for now. The first chapter is actually nearly done, but I wanna upload it when the conclusion is done as well
Or that's the plan anyway. But knowing me, the plan will inevitably change
1185665 So... "Get away from me" is a-go? Or were you talking about a different stories first chapter?
Come Back To Me <=> Get Away From Me
Sorry, but I rofled at this
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That's the idea
When are we getting that Nothing Set In Stone spin off story you we talking about? I really can't wait to read it, post it now pleeeeeeease!
1185665 All I can say, this spin off's name and premise only recently reminded me of a song.
Kind of a fitting name too, but I thought it was an interesting coincidence that I found this song days after hearing of this spin off.
but I guess a lot more characters would be hiding from the sun in this case..
Anyway, best of luck and I hope we can all have a good spin off. It can be done, but I guess you will have to work hard.
I have a few general advices on how you can improve certain things from the previous story, like maybe making the bully and Chris friends, in such a way that the story would get us to feel something for Dan by the time we figure out what went wrong when he's acting all wrong. If anything, that would make for a more interesting introduction for the bully than the one we got in the original, because he would seem more human and it would also show the influence of Celestia's parents more clearly, as opposed to everything that Dan did in the original. In the original we did not understand even a iota of his motivation, outside being transparently evil, because that was everything that was said in the story.. He is a bully, therefore evil. (again, going with what the story explained. I did follow up on what your responses were to these questions in the past and I know what you planned, but that's not something the story hinted at)
Stuff like that is what I'm afraid we'll have to read again in this spin off..
I can go on with a lot of other points, but right now, I'll just let you think about just this one suggestion and tell me what you think.
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In this spin off, Dan isn't even going to be in it.
I can't really give away too much, but here is the basis for this story.
Brief Description- In this story, Crystal/Chris's life was never controlled as Celestia's request was denied by her parents.
As the years went on from this, Celestia's view on the world began to change. The dream that she, Crystal and Luna had for a Utopia-Equestria soon began to appear naive. The result of this eventually lead up to multiple changes within the original history of Equestria.
Luna was never banished because instead of Celestia becoming blinded by her subjects' praise, she instead chose to merely accept it and focus on helping her sister into her role as a Co-Ruler. This in turn allowed her to see the bitterness Luna began to put out, thus allowing her to reason and calm her down, as well as shoot down any plans for Eternal Night with straight logic of the planet not being able to function solely on the Moon alone.
Unfortunately although this was changed, Luna's hope for a peaceful Equestria was not. An argument happened between the two of them, thus leading up to Luna abandoning her positions as Princess and forming a group that battled against Celestia's Tyranny.
Celestia is known as a Tyrant to some and a strict but fair ruler to others.
Without going into it too much and spoiling a major part of the story, here is a scenario that some consider tyrannical whilst others see it as Justice.
A stallion kills someone's daughter/son and as such is stripped of his ability to ever create life VIA birth, as well as banned from ever adopting a foal. He is also sentenced to whatever further punishment the family of the dead daughter/son wishes to bestow upon him.
How Chris/Crystal comes into it will also be different from the original story. Celestia won't act like she did then. She will instead be calm, clever and cause him to choose a side without actually forcing him.
And that's all I'm saying for now. What do you think?
I hope it's just amazing that is toxic love was great