Is it really that good...? · 8:23pm Feb 20th, 2013
I know that Inner Demons was my first serious FiM fiction I ever wrote, and it's good, but I hear people on the internet talking about how it's "one of the most epic fanfictions they ever read" and how "It would blow Canterlot Wedding out of the water".
God... is it really THAT great of a story?
I am honored that something I wrote is so well loved. Thank you everyone for making Inner Demons as great as it is. The author is only half, truly, it's the readers that really make a story amazing.
You guys are the greatest.
Now you're just fishing for praise, aren't you? Like those girls on facebook, who post their absolutely gorgeous pics with a description "omg I'm so ugly"
Indeed it is good sir
Is this some kind of a trap?
If we say 'yes' and applaud to you.. will you write another one like Inner Demons? :D
Well, no matter what, it was awesome! Here, take a mustache of awesomeness.
Yeah it is that good! It was the reason I wanted to write my story 'what choice do I have?' Which has become my top story. I applaud you for your work and cannot wait for the continuation
849843 Oh no, not even. I hate people who fish for praise. I know I'm a great writer, I'm just shocked that my writing has such a following.
Well I liked it
Dude... it fucking IS one of the bets and most epic fanfics I, and many more have ever read.
It will stay known forever
I mean, it was in the feature for like a month
Just last night I was talking in the FimFiction IRC and I brought up Inner Demons as an example of a story that does emotion extremely well. Personally Inner Demons is one of the top stories for me on this site, and got me to finally start writing Of Loyalty and Chaos (though they share nothing in common storywise).
You underestimate how good a job you did on that story!
great???? GREAT??????!!!!
IT WAS
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Personally, I think calling it great is an understatement! It was so good, I ended up reading it a second time! Once I started reading this story, I couldn't put it down!
850079 My thoughts exactly!
I absolutely loved it and are going to re-read it at the earliest time possible!!
I've read close to a thousand stories since arriving here last summer; Inner Demons is easily in the top 50.
Coming from someone who tends to nitpick or find the majority of the fanfictions dull or overrated, you're the only writer that has made a fanfiction that I truly was invested in. You proved that you could make an angsty yet well-thought out story at the same time that treated you like an adult. Not a lot of stories do that and the only real criticism I can throw out is that the action scenes weren't really developed all that much like the rest of the story.
You truly are a piece of work
Yes, it is. Inner Demons is the best fanfic in My Little Pony history. I'm actually about to read it for like the 10th time. Only other story I've done that for is Petriculture, and that's a one-shot, so it takes less time to read.
Well, congratulations might be in order. To be honest though, Miss Sapphire, is it really so surprising? You put a lot of effort, hard work, and creativity into that story and are even looking to expand on it further. I'd say it was a clear conclusion. Keep up the great work.
Hey we're only giving credit where it's due.
I'm still awaiting for 10 Years to come into FimFiction :D
This
Inner Demons is one of my go-tos, one of the first to spring to mind, when I think "dark and epic." It occupies a similar shelf to The Immortal Game.
Also, they're both (although I've finished reading neither) part of the inspiration for my own inadequate-by-comparison story. xD