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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • 6 days
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 2 weeks
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 2 weeks
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 3 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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Jan
18th
2024

Eros up next but C&C is not forgotten... · 5:23pm January 18th

The last release was a success, picking up one new like and a slew of additional tracks, so a warm welcome to new readers! Hope you enjoy the story, both what's already written and going forward. I typically blog about my stories, both to keep readers up to date on release schedules and what to expect in them going forward.

As far as Feathered Hearts goes, a new entry of Eros is up next. I’ve got all these words already written for it, so it’d be a little ridiculous not to finish a chapter of it first, but don't worry: I’m already planning the next chapter of Continuation and Chronicles in my head. It will include a significant amount of borrowed text from the original story for the first time in a while (pulled from chapter 10), but the main scene will be Gilda attending a Council of War which catches her up—and thus the reader—on the overall situation the Kingdom faces. Expect Firefly-style battle and campaign maps to feature prominently as well. They’re a lot of work to make, definitely, but worth it in the end.

Readers of the original story may recall that Gilda bore the rank of Sub-Tribune by chapter 10 and found that she had inherited command of Aricia when the previous Captain was killed, leaving her the ranking officer. Obviously, that's not happened here, but going forward...? Well, she ain't ready to command a city and she knows it. But that isn't to say that a certain somecreature else we’ve already met couldn't if and when the time comes.

If you think that's foreshadowing, so be it. I'm also planning on a funeral service followed by getting them settled in their new barracks with their griffon allies. Needless to say, they're going to be a little surprised by discovering the griffies actually use communal Roman-style bathhouses, though they’re thankfully *slightly* more sanitary than those of ancient Rome. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ancient_Roman_bathing

Given the reputation of Roman bathhouses, is that an opportunity for M-rated shenanigans? Possibly, but not right away, and definitely not the main emphasis for now. We've had our fun, and it'll be time to get back to business as they and the Cloven make plans.

Oh yes, and it's time to pick up one other loose end from earlier in the story. Don't think I've forgotten about the text Chris received from Starlight Glimmer, folks. I promise to address that soon. Possibly even next chapter if I find a good spot for it.

Comments ( 2 )

Magnificent news, looking forward to it ♡
Be it the main story progress ♤ or Eros ♡

But I wonder what Equestria is sending and if the Cloven are focused on Griffonia or other nations as well.
The C&C 3 Scrin Invasion comes to mind:

Attacking multible points for maximum chaos and keeping everyone in the defense as to prevent one side giving uncontested assistance.

Oh yeah, i'm looking forward to what Starlight Glimmers text ment.

The mixed bathing might be something the changlings pushed for from the shades, to have a place in every military installation, to get some love in a pinch.

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