514849

That was what I was shooting for, right there. Planning that out went smoothly enough, but actually typing it out ... I won't lie, that was hard.

514844
I liked how you wrote the ending, it caught what Derpy experienced when she died.

Thank ya kindly for tracking When Goodbye Comes Too Soon! If you haven't already done so, I encourage you to rate and comment.

Thank you so much for the Fave of my story The Youth in the Garden. That you did means that my efforts to commemorate a life and a battle worked to some small degree.

392308
you're welcome (I'm working on a fanfic, It'll be up soon)