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Feo Takahari


Mainly an editor. Currently working for Rakni.

Nov
13th
2014

So, I have a new project . . . · 1:45am Nov 13th, 2014

I wanted to do something relatively writing-light while I recover from depression. I also have a tendency to click random links on /d/ when I'm bored. These have combined into my very first Let's Play!

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Nov
1st
2014

Why you don't need to get all cringey and apologetic just because you accidentally broke a rule in Short Stories · 9:22am Nov 1st, 2014

I once had to tell a certain BNF that her ten new additions to Short Stories, part of her massive campaign of spamming stories into every group that was remotely related, had all been removed for length violations. This was her full and complete response.

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Oct
19th
2014

I'm so, so sorry about this . . . · 11:37pm Oct 19th, 2014

Chitin is on hiatus until I find an antidepressant that works for me without side effects.

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Oct
16th
2014

So I did some editing . . . · 4:52am Oct 16th, 2014

A while ago, I found a Zecora fic called The Striped Pony, which was quite clever and well-thought-out, but had a lot of language issues. It turned out the author was a non-native speaker, and I volunteered to edit the story for him. The edits are now complete and posted.

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Sep
28th
2014

Creepy moral stances and me · 12:01am Sep 28th, 2014

Tagged to Chitin because it's a chapter of Chitin that prompted all this. This'll be a bit self-indulgent, so feel free to skip over it if you're not interested.

The long and short of it: I write a lot of characters with weird morals, but I promise I won't sermonize or try to push them on you.

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Sep
17th
2014

Some thoughts on Celestia and war · 10:22pm Sep 17th, 2014

This was inspired by BronyWriter's Warmongering, which features a Celestia who does everything she can to avoid war, and its contrast with some stories that make Celestia warlike or even genocidal. I've been thinking for a while about why those stories make me uncomfortable, and I'd like to outline some possible views of Celestia.

Celestia as Greek god

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Sep
11th
2014

Fics I'll probably never write · 5:40am Sep 11th, 2014

A quick collection of ideas that went nowhere, and why they failed:

A World Without Harmony: Nightmare Moon escapes into our world, possessing an alternate version of Celestia to spread her loneliness and hatred. The Bearers follow, possessing their human counterparts. Angsty exploration of human nature ensues.

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Sep
8th
2014

Chapter 5 is finally done! · 2:39am Sep 8th, 2014

I cried, I bargained, I considered cancelling the story . . . but it's finally done, and hopefully it doesn't suck! (I'm sorry it took so long, but this is one of two chapters I absolutely can't screw up.)

Retcons to date:
* Changelings can now walk on clouds. This is the only retcon that will matter going forward--it was limiting my options way too much.

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Aug
28th
2014

I just watched someone implode · 9:39pm Aug 28th, 2014

To start off with, I know I share at least one follower with the person I'm writing about. Feel free to correct anything I got wrong in this post, but please don't name anyone involved. This is not meant to be a name-and-shame post--I'm just trying to put together my thoughts.

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Aug
24th
2014

I think I wrote myself into a corner · 6:48am Aug 24th, 2014

Inspired by a suggestion from Vates Despero, I changed a lot of my ideas for what I would do for chapter 5. This is a brief, unedited excerpt in which Fluttershy is suddenly reminded of her mother:

A little yellow filly rushed through the front entrance of her cloud house, crying every step of the way. She nearly bowled her mother over with a desperate, wordless hug.

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