I highly recommend reading the new Episode 3. I understand if you don't want to, but I think its worth it. Everything is more in-character now; Cadenza's rants, Derpy's speech, Twilight's defiance... the list goes on.

Not to mention the absolute epic battle. I don't want to give anything away, but this new fight is mostly my own now. There's a bit left over from the original anime, and a pinch of influence from me re-watching Ant-Man, but on the whole it is my own battle sequence.

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Whew! Another chapter finished. Re-finished. Once again, I have impressed myself with the improvements I made. There's quite a lot of them.

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I took a break from writing yesterday (typing, whatever) and banged out an MLP version of the first Logan trailer. You know, that awesome masterpiece with the Johnny Cash version of "Hurt" in the background? Yeah, I ponified it. I'm not the first, that much I know, but I got my version out before Draft the Filmmaker so I'm happy.

I think I did a pretty decent job on it, too. Though I just rewatched it and realized that I could've swapped one scene around and it would've been better, and-

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Episode 1 of 6 finished revising; yeah, that took a lot. Most of the changes were in how things were worded. Dialogue was made more in character towards the ponies, while narration was given better details that flowed nicer.

But there were also some larger changes. They still don't change the story itself, but from a writing standpoint they work better. I'd like to go over a few:

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I'm nearing the end of my first re-write. The first chapter of the story was always the worst, in about every way I can think of. I've pretty much had to go from scratch. But I'm quite proud of what I've managed to do thus far.

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Hey everypony. Wow, this was... actually pretty fun! Some chapters are harder to write than others, but this one seemed relatively easy. It only took me as long as it did because I didn't have a lot of time to work on it each day.

But there are a few notes her, that won't really fit in at the end of the chapter normal.

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Okay, I swear this was not intentional. I found this image just now, and it totally predates my story. But I've never seen it before! Still, the way they are fighting and holding the swords is pretty much how I imagine it in my story, just less... humanized. And of course, with different characters.

Yeah, I only just realized what holiday was this week. Oops. But it's a good opportunity for me to give thanks for stuff I've forgotten to in the past.
Let's start with my loyal readers. All of you, thanks for giving me a chance! You're really helping boost my confidence again and again.
Then of course there's friends and family IRL. The ones who support me and make it possible for me to be posting here at all.
The non-religious among you may want to stop reading now.

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hey readers, I know that some of you may be a little upset about the way the story has been going; I understand. I also want to make the story better. some advice from one dedicated reader has opened my ideas to the possibility of filler/slice-of-life chapters. I would just like to know if any of you have ideas (based in this story's world) that you might like to see me write. it could be anything, about any character (so long as it isn't something I plan on writing in later).

so, I just watched the LOGAN teaser trailer. and duuuuuude. its awesome. unfortunately, I now want to do an mlp trailer dub of it. the reason that's unfortunate is because it will take like, a week, for me to do the dub. so the next chapter could be delayed another bit. hopefully I can keep my focus on writing, but the desire to do the dub is stronger than hulk in OML comic.