Journal Entry, ~10 years ago, before Luna and Discord.
Male. Los Angeles, California. Hmm. I have a WPM of 65. Meh. Occasionally arts. Lord of Dorkness's #1 fan. User #26976. inb4 Crossover
I suddenly wondered, what if some son-to-be magical girl saw how powerful witches were, and thought that they just needed to have better self control, and decided to help her friends by wishing her witch form to be in as complete control of her mental faculties as five minutes ago (or something to that affect)?
Do you guys actually EXIST?
Is there any reason you guys follow me? (ignoring those who just want to favorite everybody, which makes it practically impossible for a average joe like me to get noticed)
It feels as if I have an group of people with me but when I look behind me, its all a bunch of cardboard cutouts.
A bullet marked in green slides into place, a sliver of light falling gently upon it. The hand pushes the bolt closed, shrouding the bullet in darkness, but not before the sound of the empty casing bouncing off steel is heard. Several meters distant, a tiny point of light reaches the bullet, held tightly between its own casing. Inside the casing, a mass of black matter swirls violently, energy eager to be released. Outside, an eye lines up the shot, twists the theatrics setting to zero, and
A Writing Exercise
"Fine, you want to have a card duel over your fate?" Shtik growled. "Fine, I'll humor ya. Don't say I didn't warn you it wouldn't be pleasant."
The ignorant teen stood across from Shtik, an apparatus tied to his arm. Shtik waved a hand at him. "Go ahead."
The teen clenched his teeth, pulling out a card and -
"Whoops, you activated my trap card!" Shtik yelled from the other side of the arena.
I can easily write dialogue for a character I'm intimately familiar with. I could probably write a half way decent monologue if I wanted to. But the moment I start bringing other characters in, I start cringing at the crap I'm typing. I seriously can't go on. And this made me realize that if I want to continue more "Morphling" fic, I will need help. Desperately. So halp.
(Problems: Characterization, dialogue, realistic reactions.)
What if two people had their mind switched, but not their bodies?
Example: Person A's mind is stuck in Person B, but still controls Person A. Therefore, Person A still controls the same body, but receives sensory signals from Person B's body. Same for Person B, who now looks through Person A's eyes at his body, which B still controls.