Ok thank you so much!!

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This group is designed to help people get comments on their stories, so you may want to join it and submit the story there. Also, when you receive a notification saying that the story has been added to a bookshelf take the time to visit that person's page and thank them for investing in your work. If they reply, feel free to ask them, politely, what they liked and disliked about the piece. I know how much feedback matters to us authors, so don't be shy about asking for some!

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I'm new here and this is my first fan fiction. I'm not new to writing but this is a first time thing. I would love some feedback! How can I get people to give me feedback on my story?

Why hello there, new FIMFiction user! Welcome to the premiere site for MLP fan fiction!

Ginger, if you have any questions about how the site works, then please don't be afraid to ask me. I'm glad to be of service, and we are all glad that you've joined on!