So, I got a good "throughful" review of my story!

THE GOOD: It points out my flaws!

THE BAD: I HAVE TOO MANY.

Looking back now, it IS a horrible story. There was something twitching in my neck telling me to.....at least point out the negatives, but I foolishly ignored it, calling my only negative the mistypings.

Boy I was wrong.

I will now rewrite the WHOLE ENTIRE THING. Starting from the prologue. Following the advice of this awesome reviewer.