>implying Daring Do isn't a Mary Sue

191155
Hey now, Daring Do is a protagonist in a series of adventure novels, she's allowed to be off-the-wall awesome!

Not bad. Please, continue writing this. I look forward to seeing more of it.

I think imma keep this tracked until its complete :O

Can't wait for it to be done though

this is great, but 2 things...
1) whats the point of using a pen name if your self insertion character has your real name...
2) you had a fishing rod set up by their camp... ponies are herbivorous creatures and therefore can't digest fish, therefore have no need for a fishing rod

191523
Dash considers herself famous enough that it's plausable somebody else would write fanfiction about her. Nobody else does, but Dash does. And the fishing rod is useful in constructing makeshift camps.

191155
You're a mary sue, dick.

You had me at: " lewd descriptions of Daring Do's plot hole"

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192476 They wouldn't be using fishing poles for anything they wouldn't have invented fishing poles, it doesn't really make sense. They could bring something like twine, string, use the vines in the forest, use sticks in the forest, etc. But fishing poles, I don't think so.

191523

There are ponies that eat fish. They are Icelandic.

After the first sentence of Rainbow's fanfic, I started t wonder if she'd taken writing lessons from a certain General Jenit Sulla (retired)... (Obscure references, yay!)

331690
how dare you besmirch the biographer to a HERO OF THE IMPERIUM!

Daring Do's plot hole. Oh, god. That's funny.

191523 Obviously they were fishing for lilypads or seaweed or something. x)

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Why doesn't anyone seem to know that equines can digest meat?
Even the ancient greeks knew about that.

I wonder how hard it would be for someone to figure out that Rainbow Dash wrote that fanfic
*Somepony walks up looks at book* "Hmm, Daring DO, and Rainbow Dash and The Trials of Temptation , by chromatic speedster"
Wonder who this is by?" *facehoof* "Of course I know who wrote it, Scootaloo, who else."

898469 Fulgor knew it... he told the other one as much.