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Joy. This will surely work out well for everyone.
see new chapter, extremley happy
saw 4K words... well... still new chapter
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Yeah, a little on the short side, I know. I'm trying to get back into fairly regular updates, 3 months of 60+ hour weeks put me a bit behind schedule.
Proper grammar is "could have hurt her"
Several times where "I" is not capitalized. You might want to go through this again.
Also, how did you become so familiar with interrogation techniques?
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Me? Familiar with interrogation techniques? Why, I have no idea what you mean...
4112926 still...superior chapter...slow slow build up... the wonders he will do to him
Don't you dare be brief on the description later on... I want to feel it
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Oh, I certainly wont fall short with the details, but I also want to avoid turning this into a snuff fic. It's a fine line to walk, between powerful, visceral description, and gore for the sake of gore. It'll be a challenge, but as amazing as I am, I should be able to pull it off.
4161155 just write "gore ahead. Read under your own responsibility "
The same way some fics have clop worning
I am with the the Rat on this one. Behemoth the surgeon is far more terrifying than Behemoth the soldier.
Yeah, the last two "options" were not really options at all. And of course, now that I think about it, of all the things that they could have done, attacking Luna probably was one of the dumbest. I would call them smart in a few degrees, but, now in hindsight, attacking Luna even in a fit of desparation to get her out of the way was kind of pointless.
You can slaughter a schoolhouse, kill the teacher, burn the town for all Celestia cares, but touch her sister... You have crossed the alicorn's line.
If the entire next chapter is all about what exactly went down, I might skip it. I may be getting back into reading, and I am appreciative of updates, but I have a feeling it might be a bit much for me.
On the bright side, I will have to revisit some of your earlier fight scenes, for reasons of personal interest, to improve on my own. Needless to say, you pull off a descriptive fight rather well.
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Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. The next chapter will be...graphic, but I don't want that to be ALL it is. This entire event is a significant story driver, so a large bit of progression will be mixed in as well. I know that some fics are famous strictly BECAUSE of their over the top violence and gore, and that's simply not what I want my work to be known for.
As far as your feedback about my fight scenes, thanks a lot, those are something I very rarely read done well, so puling them off in a quality fashion was a huge motivator for me. I'm glad to know my labors in that field paid off.
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Fight scenes have never been a specialty of mine, especially when over half the characters do not have fingers, or walk bipedally.
And np. For a brief bit of time this story outright vanished from my "read later" list for reasons I am not fully aware of.
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I've never actually heard of that. This particular...outburst is almost verbatim from a conversation I had with a friend of mine a few years back. I may or may not have been inebriated at the time.
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More along the lines of traps, mines, control of strategic and tactical approaches, with barricades, blocked roads, damaged logistics, basically controlling how and from where a numerically superior enemy can safely or quickly approach you, while not putting your own limited forces in direct risk. Although, I suppose that terminology could mean vehicles or war machines of some kind...dang it, now you've got me considering some kind of equine controlled armored transports...hmmm....
EQAD went down and came back up, but the interim didn't diminish a damn thing. loved chapter 21, seemed like a fitting consequence for the unlucky one, and I look forward to the next chapters!