Damn it Spitfire you stupid fool. How do you even get this messed up in the head?. And Iron~ some of us are looking forward to whats going to happen to you~ hehehe. Also is there going to be any mass war fighting or is this story pretty much set up and guerrilla tactics?
Okay... note to self: Griffons are my least favorite race in the MLP world, no exception. Well... exception for Gilda, since she's not bad, right? Right, author? Or do you have other... plans for her?
From what I've seen in the show, Equestria has enough guards to protect Canterlot with some to spare, but not enough it seems to mount a full scale attack. I would assume the same would be for the griffons. Thus, while they may want to, sending a large army to invade the other would leave the attacker vulnerable, so that's why the griffon's are sticking with guerrilla warfare and sabotage.
You are the second author I have ever bothered to contact, but i love reading your stories. Your damn near the best author on this site. Keep up the good work dude
How many of you just want to bomb the f*ck out of Ray now? I really hope Thunder can expose Iron for the bastard and mother*cker he is! He shall pay for harming Dash again! Damn you Spitfire for making this happen!
Buuuuttt, other than that little tangent... nicely written.
BTW, with the multiple alternate endings, should I upload it after your ending is done or upload it whenever I'm done with it to try to tie it in with some accounts of the story?
hey what if the griffon broke one of tanks legs because it was the dark and the griffon thought it was the turtles head or what iron thought was the turtle was something else and broke it instead could you put that into the story thecamel pppppppllllllleeeeeaaaassssseee
Spitfire, you conniving little witch. Off to buck your rookie's man?! For shame. but all in all, it was pretty good. But that was a little brutal to attack the pet, dontcha think?
I'm shocked I haven't been threatened by PETA yet.
Yeah... I was brutal on poor Tank... even worse is the fact that he's my favorite pet in MLP. I've been bouncing a few ideas in my head, and with the help of some suggestions I have a solid idea for Ch 10. I think some, if not all of you will be happy with what I have planned.
I've followed this whole story from the beginning and its really good. I enjoy that you dont go down the easy road and go cruel. But after reading this chapter I just want to go and punch you multiple times. Dashie has had enough just from the "Fire in her eye" story you dont have to kill her anymore just let her be; choose anypony else but please just leave dash be till the end PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSE
Did you read the first story? If not, that story is written in second person so basically... "you," or the character you're portraying. I say that because the pony you're portraying becomes Dash's special somepony.
Oh? Spitfire has found a reason to go to Ponyville and get near our mystery stallion. Do I smell a threesome? I hope so!! Dammit Spitfire! You're getting all paranoid! You need to calm down and just think things through. And again Spitfire, you are acting all unkind and mean and non-captain-y. I'm happy to see that Thunderbird lives, and I hope that he will kick Iron's ass for what he did. Hell, let Discord have his merry way with him. That should be good.
Damn it Spitfire you stupid fool. How do you even get this messed up in the head?. And Iron~ some of us are looking forward to whats going to happen to you~ hehehe. Also is there going to be any mass war fighting or is this story pretty much set up and guerrilla tactics?
IRON MUST DIE HORRABLY AND PIANFULLY
I just finished reading this entire story in one go... I mean, holy shit. I couldn't stop reading.
Liked favorited followed FOR THE LOVE OF CELESTIA MOAR
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Bring on ze cupcakes!
Okay... note to self: Griffons are my least favorite race in the MLP world, no exception. Well... exception for Gilda, since she's not bad, right? Right, author? Or do you have other... plans for her?
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i would like to personally commend you on reading all of those chapters in one go
also DAMN YOU IRON, FROM HELLS HEART I STAB AT THEE
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From what I've seen in the show, Equestria has enough guards to protect Canterlot with some to spare, but not enough it seems to mount a full scale attack. I would assume the same would be for the griffons. Thus, while they may want to, sending a large army to invade the other would leave the attacker vulnerable, so that's why the griffon's are sticking with guerrilla warfare and sabotage.
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I make no promises.
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So......
I'm sensing some hostility towards a certain griffon.
You are the second author I have ever bothered to contact, but i love reading your stories. Your damn near the best author on this site. Keep up the good work dude
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Always love to hear what people think, whether good or bad. Glad you like my work!
How many of you just want to bomb the f*ck out of Ray now? I really hope Thunder can expose Iron for the bastard and mother*cker he is! He shall pay for harming Dash again! Damn you Spitfire for making this happen!
Buuuuttt, other than that little tangent... nicely written.
BTW, with the multiple alternate endings, should I upload it after your ending is done or upload it whenever I'm done with it to try to tie it in with some accounts of the story?
Also, now's the time she wishes she would've chosen the Falcon instead...
2754978 wut about thundy?
whenever iron rook does something:
key word yet. there's still hope!
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I see fog around my house.
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I feel that Stone Cold should whip Iron's ass
Oh Hell Yeah!!
Wow, I feared, that you wll go with the amnesia story...
Good thing you didn't
When is the movie coming out? LOL
hey what if the griffon broke one of tanks legs because it was the dark and the griffon thought it was the turtles head or what iron thought was the turtle was something else and broke it instead could you put that into the story thecamel pppppppllllllleeeeeaaaassssseee
2760229 at least could you have rainbow dash wake up in the morning and find tank some how still alive
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Most of the time, using that feels like cheating.
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If I had the money, I would absolutely commission an artist to do a comic on this.
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Let me PM you...
2759229 or maybe thunderbird could do it
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Can Thunderbird at least drink beer
Spitfire, you conniving little witch. Off to buck your rookie's man?! For shame. but all in all, it was pretty good. But that was a little brutal to attack the pet, dontcha think?
2764068 XD in his canon form (hes from a video game im working on, just made a griffon form and slapped OC on it) hes a fucking alcoholic!
that moment when you realize iron almost killed angel in ch.3
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I'm shocked I haven't been threatened by PETA yet.
Yeah... I was brutal on poor Tank... even worse is the fact that he's my favorite pet in MLP. I've been bouncing a few ideas in my head, and with the help of some suggestions I have a solid idea for Ch 10. I think some, if not all of you will be happy with what I have planned.
Or maybe not.
Who knows?
2766806 considering i've absolutely loved everything you've done, im sure i will
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Well, it shouldn't be too hard to bring Tank back. I mean, it's not like he had his neck snapped...
...
oh wait. Whoops...
2767762 i hate you and love you at the same time...
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heeheehee.
Iron Rook...
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I'm sensing some hostility towards Iron... can't imagine why...
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My thoughts exactly on him. HE MUST DIE!
That motherfucker. *loads pistol*
Time to hunt me some motherfucking griffon.
To the author
I've followed this whole story from the beginning and its really good. I enjoy that you dont go down the easy road and go cruel. But after reading this chapter I just want to go and punch you multiple times. Dashie has had enough just from the "Fire in her eye" story you dont have to kill her anymore just let her be; choose anypony else but please just leave dash be till the end PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSE
Awww, Tank... you made me cry.
Bu-bu-buh.... Tank!
one thing i'm confused about, who is the "special somepony"? it isn't Soarin because Spitfire referred to him as her best bud.
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Did you read the first story?
If not, that story is written in second person so basically... "you," or the character you're portraying. I say that because the pony you're portraying becomes Dash's special somepony.
Oh? Spitfire has found a reason to go to Ponyville and get near our mystery stallion. Do I smell a threesome? I hope so!! Dammit Spitfire! You're getting all paranoid! You need to calm down and just think things through. And again Spitfire, you are acting all unkind and mean and non-captain-y. I'm happy to see that Thunderbird lives, and I hope that he will kick Iron's ass for what he did. Hell, let Discord have his merry way with him. That should be good.
~SolidFire
Iron Rook, you have unleashed the wrath of Dominic and all of my characters upon yourself. You can run, but you wont hide long.
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