Damn... I didn't see this chapter coming. When Soarin' was captured by the griffons, I thought... "Oh crap, here we go again" but as I saw that they were welcoming, I realized that they were separatists and wanted to resolve to conflict peacefully and no need for blood and rape. But damn... I-I felt sorry for them... Probably the deepest chapter yet dude. I hope there are more separatists out there that are willing to find peace with Equestria. Definitely loved this chapter! Great job!!
Now I'm anxious to see what you do with my idea! I can't wait for Chapter 5!!! Keep up the great work!!!
Nightmare Moon returns! Slaughter them all! I retract that statement... How could they!? That's awful. Seriously, the military has at least some sort of moral code when it comes to dealing with children. That's just downright evil.
wtf??? a chapter with no clop???
You have betrayed my trust. This is the most despicable act I can possibly imagine.
What's this? Character development?
Now, what's that silly little thing doing in my >rape story?
Seriously though, this is a nice change of pace. It's interesting to see the gyphon's side. Or at least, the ones who didn't want in on this war.
Shame they all got cooked.
Damn... I didn't see this chapter coming. When Soarin' was captured by the griffons, I thought... "Oh crap, here we go again" but as I saw that they were welcoming, I realized that they were separatists and wanted to resolve to conflict peacefully and no need for blood and rape. But damn... I-I felt sorry for them... Probably the deepest chapter yet dude. I hope there are more separatists out there that are willing to find peace with Equestria. Definitely loved this chapter! Great job!!
Now I'm anxious to see what you do with my idea! I can't wait for Chapter 5!!! Keep up the great work!!!
Fuck it, this story is just toying with my mind.
But still, great chapter.
Pretty deep chapter. I like it :)
you are such a talented writer, this chapter was really good, and i'm on the edge of my butt waiting for chapter 5!
Nooooo!!! Not the children. D:
THAT, was brutal... I think you may have crossed the line somewhere around here...
2516526 I would of thought that rape would cross the line.
The young ones
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I was so, so tempted to put in this quote...
2521500 I was thinking the exact same thing!
2516526 A story like this? There is no such thing called a line.
All the bodies were donated to Wendy's
Where's the beef!?
Whoa... I don't even know what to say :/
holy shit....i just....no words....seriously
Noooooow whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Nightmare Moon returns! Slaughter them all! I retract that statement... How could they!? That's awful. Seriously, the military has at least some sort of moral code when it comes to dealing with children. That's just downright evil.
You have betrayed my trust. This is the most despicable act I can possibly imagine.
~SolidFire