Chivalry is dead I am trying to revive it. Honest man you are Marcus. Even when things were starting to get a little out of hand, your being honest toward your favorite pony and don't want to regret any hastily made decision. Though its kinda saddening to see Fluttershy like this.. please cheer her up
Aaahh, an update! Makes me want to finish my own chapter even faster Sad to see Fluttershy like this, but Marcus's a gentleman... But really? Something they would both regret? I have a feeling Fluttershy wouldn't regret much... but seeing what happened in your other story, I'm thinking there might be a twist coming our way... -Glassed
Pffffffffftttttt!! A 17 year old turning down sex? HA! Ok I'll stop that now. It was very adorable to see Fluttershy on the attack, and actually see the human shoot her down. For admiral purposes granted. I do enjoy seeing how writers portray Flutters, and so far, I think it is a fine portrayal. I will fav and read more.
“They say chivalry is dead. I’m trying to revive it.”
But then again, technically you are too. Chivalry is a Brony too!
292884 So there will be foals! I wonder, will they be human, pony, centaur, or some other form of hybrid, or possibly will some inherit being a pony and others will inherit being a human?
First. Squeee update! Naughty naughty Marcus, you're womanizing Fluttershy. ;)
"um ive already met him rarity" said fluttershy
I see what you did thar!
Chivalry is dead I am trying to revive it.
Honest man you are Marcus. Even when things were starting to get a little out of hand, your being honest toward your favorite pony and don't want to regret any hastily made decision. Though its kinda saddening to see Fluttershy like this.. please cheer her up
Aaahh, an update! Makes me want to finish my own chapter even faster
Sad to see Fluttershy like this, but Marcus's a gentleman... But really? Something they would both regret?
I have a feeling Fluttershy wouldn't regret much... but seeing what happened in your other story, I'm thinking there might be a twist coming our way...
-Glassed
Fifth!
I have sinned.
I sense foals running around fluttershy's cottage in ten chapters.
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I'm not womanizing her! I love her to death and just wanna see her happy!
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I know, genius, wasn't it?
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Don't worry, she wont be sad for too much longer.
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What is your sin, my child?
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saying fifth.
i was right about the foals wasn't i? you didn't deny it.
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Longer than ten chapters.
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well at least i was half right.
I think rarity changed from a shocked rarity to an almost friendly one in just a sec. But other than that its goin very good so far
Pffffffffftttttt!! A 17 year old turning down sex? HA! Ok I'll stop that now. It was very adorable to see Fluttershy on the attack, and actually see the human shoot her down. For admiral purposes granted. I do enjoy seeing how writers portray Flutters, and so far, I think it is a fine portrayal. I will fav and read more.
But then again, technically you are too. Chivalry is a Brony too!
292884 So there will be foals! I wonder, will they be human, pony, centaur, or some other form of hybrid, or possibly will some inherit being a pony and others will inherit being a human?