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Wow. Haters gonna kill?
Btw. I came for the cute pic. I stayed for the plot.
O.o, i liked it, maybe write a fic about the dude he got ****** by then see what happens. but it would be stealing xD
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thenmelike
hater gonna hate nega haters gonna kill
Seems interesting, if only a little blunt. Could have had a bit more suspense on the whole "who is God and what is Heaven" thing, instead of just plain saying it right there. Still, I like it.
I also like the fact that it's one of the few HiE stories that doesn't involve the human totally hating his life, lol.
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well, he's going about this in basically the same way i would, because marcus is me, and i am marcus simple as that.
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Hmm, I'm more referring to some of the Celestia/God lines. Like, bam, here's how things work. So much for the eternal question of mankind xD But I guess it's just a decision to have or not some suspense in some things :P
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Well, i mean, God is omnipotent and knows what you're gonna say, how you're gonna react, and even what you're gonna think before you even know what the fuck is going on.
On a side note: looking for people to help me write lines for Zecora!! I am HORRIBLE at coming up with lines for this Zebra!! Damn you Lauren Faust for making her have to rhyme constantly!!!
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I see that rhymes make you feel queasy.
But why, I ask, if it's so easy?
Lol, I'd help but english is not even my native language so I dunno if I'm the best choice. If you don't get anything better I'm up for it :P
i like it
could you bring the guy who shot marcus into the story later on? purely so he can get the shit beaten out of him?
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Not a chance, he's going to Hell, not Heaven.
194563 Ah well at least I can take comfort in the knowledge that he will suffer eternal torture...
Dear god I am messed up
Posted earlier than first.
I like it dude. I can see where this is going. At least AJ doesn't think you're a filly-molester.
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u mean a FOALcon?
Im sorry but the pic... I need to let this out. *yakes huge breath* EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
First! Also, great job man!!
Real nice! I especially like that Fluttershy is in character the entire story. Really well done.
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Okay, check this.
FLUTTERSHY IS BEST PONY.
I dare not ruin her reputation by making her act OOC (Out Of Character).
Awww. Reading your background story made me think of the riveting moment we had on Skype, Marcus. We're here for you if you need it.
cool story bro
pretty good story, but you move things along a bit too fast imo. 4/5
In this chapter, we have:
En epic fight with chickens,
inuendoes
And a recipe for an egg-sandwich!
Best. Chapter. EVER!
-Glassed
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213921 Did all that stuff really happen to you, or just part of the story, cuz you said that you're Marcus?
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Everything in Marcus' backstory DID happen to me.... I even left out a few things, I'm saving them for later, though.
Being shot (twice) and being dead are among them.
hooves.....that is all
GOD that Cover pic is ADORABLE
First. Squeee update! Naughty naughty Marcus, you're womanizing Fluttershy. ;)
"um ive already met him rarity" said fluttershy
I see what you did thar!
Chivalry is dead I am trying to revive it.
Honest man you are Marcus. Even when things were starting to get a little out of hand, your being honest toward your favorite pony and don't want to regret any hastily made decision. Though its kinda saddening to see Fluttershy like this.. please cheer her up
Aaahh, an update! Makes me want to finish my own chapter even faster
Sad to see Fluttershy like this, but Marcus's a gentleman... But really? Something they would both regret?
I have a feeling Fluttershy wouldn't regret much... but seeing what happened in your other story, I'm thinking there might be a twist coming our way...
-Glassed
Fifth!
I have sinned.
I sense foals running around fluttershy's cottage in ten chapters.
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I'm not womanizing her! I love her to death and just wanna see her happy!
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I know, genius, wasn't it?
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Don't worry, she wont be sad for too much longer.
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What is your sin, my child?
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saying fifth.
i was right about the foals wasn't i? you didn't deny it.
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Longer than ten chapters.
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well at least i was half right.
"I made out with her about seven hours after I met her" YES! The inside joke has been brought to light!
-Glassed
It's getting LOVEY-DOVEY!
Excellent chapter 
D'aaaawww! SO MUCH WIN! TAKE ALL MY MONEY!
cant wait for more.
A bit fast paced, but enjoyable. Marcus' thoughts and motivations are a bit obscure, though that might be on purpose. I wonder why Fluttershy is so... Forward? Guess we'll see. All in all, a fun read, with minor complaints, most of which might simply be a matter of style. Good job. *Thumb up*
This story is quite interesting. I hope you will continue writing it
definitely wanting more.
Are you catolic sir? Also, have you heard about anything including haters killin bronies?
I loved zecoras rhymes. Im likin it so far though it seemed a little arrogant the "my feet are hurtin" line.
She was sleepn with another dude at age of 15??
alright then he must have a 
to make it so.early. I mean, who get s like that with a father
I think rarity changed from a shocked rarity to an almost friendly one in just a sec. But other than that its goin very good so far