Seems interesting, if only a little blunt. Could have had a bit more suspense on the whole "who is God and what is Heaven" thing, instead of just plain saying it right there. Still, I like it.
I also like the fact that it's one of the few HiE stories that doesn't involve the human totally hating his life, lol.
190312 Hmm, I'm more referring to some of the Celestia/God lines. Like, bam, here's how things work. So much for the eternal question of mankind xD But I guess it's just a decision to have or not some suspense in some things :P
Well, i mean, God is omnipotent and knows what you're gonna say, how you're gonna react, and even what you're gonna think before you even know what the fuck is going on.
On a side note: looking for people to help me write lines for Zecora!! I am HORRIBLE at coming up with lines for this Zebra!! Damn you Lauren Faust for making her have to rhyme constantly!!!
so we shouldn't enjoy anything someone elts hates? BULLSHIT!! we need a precaution put in place like a gang of only bronies our motto can be "why the hell did you try and solve your own problems?! that's why we joined a gang!" -Thugnificent- (this is a joke and shouldn't be taken seriously)
Wow. Haters gonna kill?
Btw. I came for the cute pic. I stayed for the plot.
O.o, i liked it, maybe write a fic about the dude he got ****** by then see what happens. but it would be stealing xDthenulikethenmelike
hater gonna hate nega haters gonna kill
Seems interesting, if only a little blunt. Could have had a bit more suspense on the whole "who is God and what is Heaven" thing, instead of just plain saying it right there. Still, I like it.
I also like the fact that it's one of the few HiE stories that doesn't involve the human totally hating his life, lol.
190260
well, he's going about this in basically the same way i would, because marcus is me, and i am marcus simple as that.
190312
Hmm, I'm more referring to some of the Celestia/God lines. Like, bam, here's how things work. So much for the eternal question of mankind xD But I guess it's just a decision to have or not some suspense in some things :P
190447
Well, i mean, God is omnipotent and knows what you're gonna say, how you're gonna react, and even what you're gonna think before you even know what the fuck is going on.
On a side note: looking for people to help me write lines for Zecora!! I am HORRIBLE at coming up with lines for this Zebra!! Damn you Lauren Faust for making her have to rhyme constantly!!!
190461
I see that rhymes make you feel queasy.
But why, I ask, if it's so easy?
Lol, I'd help but english is not even my native language so I dunno if I'm the best choice. If you don't get anything better I'm up for it :P
i like it
could you bring the guy who shot marcus into the story later on? purely so he can get the shit beaten out of him?
194023
Not a chance, he's going to Hell, not Heaven.
194563 Ah well at least I can take comfort in the knowledge that he will suffer eternal torture...
Dear god I am messed up
196452
Are you catolic sir? Also, have you heard about anything including haters killin bronies?
so we shouldn't enjoy anything someone elts hates? BULLSHIT!!
we need a precaution put in place like a gang of only bronies our motto can be "why the hell did you try and solve your own problems?! that's why we joined a gang!" -Thugnificent- (this is a joke and shouldn't be taken seriously)
I only haoblem with this fic: The main character is me. 17, a brony, likes Fluttershy, and still takes the bus to school? Yup, that's all me.