You should probably go over the last paragraph in this Chapter.

it seems a bit... how to put that, fractured... or strange.

“I'm going to get fat.”

(is still, quite good...)

nothing else to say good work ^^

You think about her comment with a laugh, Celasia? What about her parents? Her dad already hates me..."I think your parents would be harder to tell."

Celasia?!Fatty,are you trying to make me a spellchecker for you?

Man...

YOU SCARED THE LIVING BUCK OUT OF ME!!!!!!!

With the triplets line, of course.