Part 20 to the Maybe series Follow the main character thought his newest trails as he tries to better understand the power he possess, and its affects on those he loves.
Fatty... do you wanted to shock me?!... simply; please, no. Please not, really.... maybe three asterisks centered or so, but please no line of symbols... that makes Flutter-s-cry....
"You no to her answer as you hover a bright red apple to your mouth, but before you can bite down you notice her grab her stomach in pain." NO nod? hehe >:D
good, good... good work here ^^
the only thing i have to say is:
Fatty... do you wanted to shock me?!... simply; please, no. Please not, really.... maybe three asterisks centered or so, but please no line of symbols...
that makes Flutter-s-cry....
Sweetapple acre? Shouldn't it be SweetApple Acres?
Beside that slight spelling mistake,Twilight is going to the hospital!
Twilight, you are so stubborn...
IT MAKE ME HAPPY
"You no to her answer as you hover a bright red apple to your mouth, but before you can bite down you notice her grab her stomach in pain."
NO
nod?
hehe >:D