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Wow, he's high on fumes isn't he, once again things about to go fubar because of a clash of cultural ethics.
2317469 I figure that someone locking himself in a room with no windows and opening a can of paint to stew for a couple of hours would have roughly the same effect as Ben's situation there. We all make mistakes, don't we?
I would simply like to congratulate you on the story even if it does seem like there were two stories here, not just the one. The first of his journey to Equestria and searching for his dad which never was really finished, and the second as the 'dwarf fortress' tale.
You did base it off of the dwarf fortress game right? or a similar one like towns?
I foresee the story taking a turn down a third rout rather soon, dealing with these deicidian ponies of the north, a re-meet with the ponyville gang and him finding his father living or possibly leading the deicidian ponies and having to kill.blast him wit the elements.
If that is actually what will happen, let me know and i will remove that portion of the comment... sorry.
Good show sir!
and i award you thirteen of the not-yet-added luna emoticons! (where the f--k are those things anyway?
Well, until now only one thing has to be pointed out:
A corpse does not have pulsation, meaning the blood is not circulating. It's simply getting stagnant in the veins.
Looking at Chuck Testa's taxidermy tutorials might help you see what I mean: Blood doesn't splurt out.
2519596 I could probably think of a way to justify the statement, but it'd be easier if you just went ahead and quoted which line you had a specific problem with and I will see if I feel it needs revising due to the comment. If it's about draining the table initially, the body had been laying there for up to twenty-four hours before Ben arrived to begin, so while it may not be circulating, I was under the assumption that gravity would still be an acting force and would cause it to "pool", and then leak out of a downward-facing wound. I will not claim to be an expert however, and will go investigate a bit further.