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So far it's looking promishing. Continue please good sir.
WE OF THE COMPENDIUM APPROVE OF THIS FIC. WE WOULD LIKE TO SEE WHERE YOUR GOING WITH THIS WACKINESS AND SILLY PEOPLE.
Looks good hope to see more.
well he hit himself with a rock...yep that works for me. (it was the most logical move)
Wow guys way to represent the intelligence of our species. You break your own nose too check if you're sleeping then your friend breaks a rib and gets a cuncussion falling out of a tree so you knock yourself out. And worst of all you use bobbers fishing in the ocean.
The derp is strong with these two.
I just have one small issue with this chapter.
Who in there right mind would inflict so much pain on themselves to figure out if there dreaming or not, and again just to not deal with a tense situation?
For one, I'm a lucid dreamer and I would never inflict that much pain or damage to myself to figure out if I was dreaming or not.
And two I get that if you were to find yourself in on odd situation such as that it would illicit some odd behaviour, but your taking it a little too far there and in my opinion it just takes away from the story and ruins the atmosphere your trying to create.
Other then that its not bad so I'll keep reading it, but if Mike and Martin start reminding me of those whiny hesitant spineless bitches like on every harem anime ever made I'm out...
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To be perfectly blunt, we were not in our right minds when we wrote this. We were trying to out-troll the other in the rp. And when I decided to turn this into a story, he just said "don't change anything"... so I really didn't. Except the grammar (and later, to prune out the Skyrim references).