I loved the CQC scene, it was awesome

Also the part of the chapter that is from twilights perspective (not MAGIC Gears) got me thinking, if shining could break the brain washing on the 6 of them, who would they fight for, and would they even fight. Because Twilight has already discovered that she was lied to and would realise she was brainwashed, which is a pretty good recipe for a rage-shift twilight

I think I am over thinking this, but what I do know is that the next few chapters are going to be a fun ride

EDIT: They really need to fix the support on mobile devices, I don't know if it is just me but every time I post a comment, it doesn't work, whenever I read a notification, it won't disappear (and when I press mark all read I get the same problem I get with posting comments) and I'm always having to go on my PC to pump out comments

Damn, the gear premits the Elements from even knowing that they are being controlled, damn, Gods can be very brutel when it comes to war, shit. All I was thinking about during the hoof to hoof fight was: FINISH HIM! But shit, it's not so easy, how dare a mortal challanges the gods though. Damn, I love every single second of this, can't wait for more

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Stop using the site on your mobile then. Of course that's hardly the point(the site should work no matter what device you're using to access it) but I guess that's not in the cards until Knightly thinks "oh yeah, I should probably fix this."

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You need to get over your hatred of Shining; it's getting a little irritating seeing you constantly expressing desire for his death/suffering, and then stating dissatisfaction when it doesn't happen.

Besides, by the end of the story, you'll be loving Shining Armor for having the balls to stand up to the Princesses.

Thanks for reading, guys! Hope you'll all continue to stick around for more of this story.

2310407 Never!!!!! Nah but seriously, I'm not a fan so I'll stop wanting his death for this story but I won't have any respect for him. That's like telling me to read and love a Spike/Rarity (That will NEVER happen, EVER!!!!) so yeah.....you'll still have me as a fan and I'll shut up but no love for Armor.....ever.

2319527 Nobody ever said you had to stop commenting all together, but thanks for deciding to keep it down as it pertains to your hatred of Shining.

Speaking of "Shiny" where's that incest clopfic of him and Twilight Sparkle I was thinking of doing...

2319974 And I never shall, I'll always be a fan of your work...weather you want me to or not But yes,I shall close my mouth during this story about Armor.

Hmmm....not a bad idea, I'm in

Not bad aye, but are the tangents about terminology really necessary?

2747799 #TangentTime! It's an actual thing.

But yes I think they are; they help the reader get more immersed in the story's universe.