Most scoff at the past, stuffing it rudely behind them as they shove through and press their gaze forward towards the future. Some never can, no matter how powerful they may be. And, no matter who they are, the past always catches up. Always.
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2717237 I'm pretty good at summoning the gag reflex, if I do say so, myself.
Still working on the comedy/drama parts, though.
2717250 great chapter old boy. why i say it was quite marvelous.
2718718 Many kind thanks, sir or madame.
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2807400 Haven't written it yet. I'm too concerned with fixing the earlier chapters at the moment. No worries, though, this story will continue. I ain't even fuckin' close to done with Nix, or the other characters' stories, yet. Not even close.
But I do feel pretty bad about updating so slowly. I'll do my best to rectify that shortly.
2816235 This song is actually a pretty apt metaphor. Except for one thing.
Nix is anything but a free man.
2859096 I see someone is a fellow Redditor.
Thanks for the heads up, it's properly italicized now. (But still horrible, like the rest of my story. Please, sir, let me redirect you to more not-bad things.)
Um how the hell did he end up in Tartarus unless of course it's a memory, but even so that is a horrible jump between memories and whats going on
2860304 Ugh, I know, so chaotic. If only there were some manner of god nearby, devoted specifically to the management of all things chaos that might clear things up, but probably not.
Surely our dear protagonist wouldn't spend his time
pestering Princess Luna after severely pissing off both the sisters by disregarding both of their counsel and killing everything in Tartarusmingling with such a vile, chaotic creature or something.Surely.
I'm dead serious, Nix wouldn't pull that shit.
You didn't, perchance, have relations in Tartarus, did you?
Oh, this is so awkward. So very awkward. Please meet with your nearest priest at your earliest possible convenience.
For the corpses, man. And by golly, are there a lot of 'em. And probably more after Lu figures out just how Nix has been spending his time.
There might also be explanations. But probably not. Because I'm evil.
2860385 yeah I see where your going with but what makes no sense is why would a chaotic god/person send him to Tartarus after saying he would help him. Seems more like a dick move then anything else. Another thing, he breaks from his prison does this mean he's got his power back (dont answer cause it SHOULD be in the next chapters, and fuck spoilers)
2860406
Heh. Heheh. Heheheh. Hahahaha. Bwahahahahahaaa!
Oh, I'm sorry. I *cough* I should address this seriously:
You gots no idea, mang. Shit goin' down. Things be crazy, ya' hear? THEY BE CRAY-CRAY OFF DA' HIZZOUSE!
And if you can see where this is all goin', I'll eat my hat. And I don't even own a hat. I'll have to buy a hat to eat, which is a terrible expenditure as it means I'll have less to spend on pony shirts, and that would be bad. Do you really think you have what it takes to exact from me my love of pony shirts, Sir or Madame Flaming Reign? Do you?!
I think it's time for more rum. Or bed time. I'm not sure where my ceiling is at this point.
2860484 well how far are we going ahead here one chapter or five. If its one then possibly nix goes and beats the ever living shit out of medusa or something similar. Then again with discord "helping" I suppose that it could also mean that he's making nix remeber some things. Another 2-3 chapters ahead and nix remembers his friends and faimly is dead and he goes on a rampage untill his friends that he hasn't realized he has calm him down before he shatters reality
How close was I?
2860664 Not close at all.
Though if it's any consolation, that's pretty much the reason the princesses have continued to put up with Nix's bullshit. Seems like good policy to appease the crazed godslayer and prevent him from being any more crazy, as I see it. I doubt their good faith is infinite, however.
As an aside, any time Nix is 'remembering' something, I'm pretty good about putting it in italics.
If it's not in italics, there's a pretty good chance it's not a flashback.
2863400 haha lol
2864280 I wouldn't say 'evenly' executed. If readers stick around long enough to hit 'This Is My Boomstick', though, that's where I really hit my stride. Still not looking forward to overhauling all these earlier chapters.
Hold me, Aku! Keep the vile ministrations of...effort...at bay with your strong man-arms! And possibly guns, if you own any!
2895672 Alright, you lack man arms. But guns...guns...you have one, right? Just one?
We're fucked.
2895718 From what I've read, pretty much every character in your story is.
Lucky crowbar.
2896549 I only rewrote the first chapter. I've changed barely anything after that. That whole mess with the bees really did a number on my focus; I wasn't kidding when I said the little fuckers terrify me. I'm only now starting to get back into the groove of things. Next chapter is already up to about 5k words and I'm not done, yet.