Most scoff at the past, stuffing it rudely behind them as they shove through and press their gaze forward towards the future. Some never can, no matter how powerful they may be. And, no matter who they are, the past always catches up. Always.
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Point one: D'aaaawwwwww ending.
Point two: Desired plot twist, Poison Joke does nothing to Nix, affects Dancie greatly, Nix becomes pissed off and incinerates all local flowers.
Point three: Akumokagetsu got a new avatar. Wai, man, wai?! . Kinda sexy, dough.
3319359 Point 2? I can't do that for you, Dave...
3319488 Yeah, yeah, I've got pacing issues. Hopefully it'll start moving a lot more with the next few chapters.
And if I did that with the manticores, I may as well have made Lyra a hand-obsessed freak. Don't worry, though, we still have a cake-devouring princess and a dickhead Blueblood, so I'm well within the boundaries of prescribed HiE stereotyping.
3453407 I'm sorry to hear that. You're gonna really hate some of the later chapters...and I haven't even touched that Tragedy tag yet.
I'm a very cruel writer, and I'm very happy Nix and some of the other characters will never find me after what I'm going to do to them. Then again, it still has that comedy tag, so at least it'll be entertaining getting there.
3760492 I wrote, like, a thousand words for it the other day, and about 800ish today so far (and probably more before I'm done). Granted, I used to be able to write 3-7k words on it a day, then do nothing for a few days before writing another 3-7k words on it for the next chapter, but considering my writer's block, I-
No, you know what, fuck that, my update rate is bad, and I should feel bad. I'm actually considering truncating this chapter at a (relatively decent) stopping point so I can release it a bit earlier—it'll have a fuckton of humor, and a decent amount of actual plot progression and world-building, even if it won't be what I originally intended, but at the very least it should let you all know I'm still, uh, actually working on this story. So, your personal preferences? 20k word chapter with a bunch of stuff that can be easily molded into future chapters, or 10k word chapter reassurance?
Splitting the chapter I had in mind might actually work better, but if you've been reading my author's notes on the chapters you probably know that, already...Honestly, where the story is at now, I can make both options work without sacrificing anything of the story's integrity, and I was planning on a quicker release, anyway.
Not like that time with my last girlfriend, where I accidentally fantasized about Halle Berry and my quick release came about completely unplanned.
3803952 No, universes would only be destroyed and recreated if Nix didn't force the power into shifting him into another reality. Doing so uses up a considerable amount of his full power; all those gods, demons, and monsters he's slain were killed when he was at a fraction of the full power actually granted to him.
Don't worry, I'll get a bit more into that in the future.
2 months and 561 pages later I finished what you have so far and i LOVED it this is worthy of my top 10 story's please update i'm loving this
3872819 Many thanks, and I assure you the story is only going to get better from here. And, wow—561 pages?! I figured it was only two or three hundred...This thing is gonna make the Bible seem like a short story by the time I finish it and its two sequels.
Sadly, I've been going through some rough times, and it's adversely affected my update rate. Next chapter is at 9k words already, but the writing is slow, even if I already know what needs to happen. Kind words like yours certainly do wonders for my motivation, though, so thanks again.