grim awakening

by Grim Darkshine

grim darkness chronicles part 3 the return of grim darkshine or: crysalis strike back (episode 1)

“i love you rainbow dash” said grim to rainbow ash, “im so glad your not a changeling” “yeah me too” said raibow dash “hey lets go to sugarcube corner and kiss” he said and blushed since we was new at kissing but he had done some but not a lot so he didnt realy have all that much exporience like that one time in junur high where i
‘hey guys” said twilight when she trotted into sugarcube corner and caught rainbow dash and grim makin out behind the corner “mr and mrs cake do you know WHAT THE F*********** RAINBOW DASH AN GRIM ARE DOING!?!?!?!??!?!?” she yelled at mr and mrs cake, and they turned around and gasped or gapsed at twilight and grim on the flor and got really made
“GET OUT OF MY STORE!!!!!!!!” mr cake yelled and twilight started crying “mr cake we were just kissin” “I DONT CARE YOUVE RUINED MY STORE”
twilight and grim and rainbow dash walked out of sugarcube corner and rainbow dash yelled at them “grim i thought you lved me” “no” grim said “i don’t want to choose between you two you see...” the two ponies leaned in as looked in the wnd and the wind swayed his mane all cool looking “i am part of the prohecy thats why i couldn’t tell you why i was in the everfree forest” he said with tears in his eyes “im sorry but now ive been hiding a horrible secret from yu”
“what is it?” rainbow sparkle asing. “tears welled up in his eyes when he started speakin
“a long time ago i was a...brony” he said, cryin. “thats okay i like bronies!” twilight said but grim interrupted “but i got hit by a bus (chryalis was drivin the bus) and woke up here i have to come here to defeet crhysalis but ill di probaby”. “oh no” ainbow dash said

twist came walkin along “hi guyth” she said wile grim was telling his story “hey twist” grim said wile crying and talkin “how are you?”

“You could thay I’m-a thuper. A THUPER CHANGTHLING!” she roared, and her neck bent at a sickening angle, black bones erupting out of her neck. Her thick glasses cracked and dissolved into her eyes, which had become glowing green orbs of hatred, looking down upon the three ponies with the cruel, calculating glare of the insect queen. A jagged crown erupted out of her head, and the cutie mark that had been two candy canes morphed above her boiling skin; two black crosses replaced them, still candy-striped.

The thing that was not Twist placed her twisted hooves on the ground, and laughed.

“oh no!” the three yelled loudly at twist

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[Stereo_Sub]

I blame alphacat.

[Waterpear]

“You could thay I’m-a thuper. A THUPER CHANGTHLING!” she roared, and her neck bent at a sickening angle, black bones erupting out of her neck. Her thick glasses cracked and dissolved into her eyes, which had become glowing green orbs of hatred, looking down upon the three ponies with the cruel, calculating glare of the insect queen. A jagged crown erupted out of her head, and the cutie mark that had been two candy canes morphed above her boiling skin; two black crosses replaced them, still candy-striped.

the prose is a teensy bit purple here