Wow great chapter two of my favorite side ficts updated today yours and Fallout Equestria: Gathering Darknes My day has been made and it can only get better.

Huzzah update!

This fic is doing great... Please keep up this storyline. It's definitely one of the more interesting ones.

Some missing words up in there, but really poetic this time. I especially liked the preacher's religious talk.
Weren't Ghost's feathers burnt last time? Maybe I'll have to read the end of that chapter again!

another awesome chapter

Upon second read, I think you adressed something important here, namely the relationship between the Griffons and the Enclave.

In the original, the Talons were largely indifferent to them, but that seems odd for pretty much any culture given the (Implied) genocidal war to take the Gryphonian skies.

Maybe the Enclave pulled the dishonour-the-leader trick to make discussing it a faux-par?

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Thank you for noticing this! Yes I did find the apathy as a good opportunity to insert a little something. As to the annexation itself I'm still deliberating. If memory serves Kkat mentioned a griffin council which made me think that the traditional griffin kingdom was organized sort of into independent city-states that all send leaders and whatnot.

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Comments like this are very much appreciated, they help me keep soldiering on.

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Much is planned good sir, I just hope that I haven't overstepped my bounds with the fire spirit thingy.

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Hm, must get over and read that one!

370927 Haha i know yull enjoy it also im almost positive that a griffin council was mentioned it may have been on the last chapter, also the fire powers i feel really helps ghost stand out not enough to be judged but enough to *Breaks perfectionism* BE AWESOME!! *Ahem* i meant it makes him more of a round character in the way he thinks /)

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Gawdnya mentioned something about democracy being a Gryphonian concept, so maybe analogous to modern day england or something. (ie respected but largely powerless nobles and bickering irritating policicians)

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More fire! Everything is better on fire! Even fire is better on fire! But yes, I'm trying to make Ghost different, a little dash of pyro, but not predictable pyro.

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WHO LEAKED MY PLANS!
Ahem.
Yes, I will be exploring the reasons there was no 'major' griffin involvement in the war. Ineffectual government anyone?

399301 *Sits and waites for the next chapter* You had me at Griffin and pyro
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Applejack what does the scouter say about pinkys excitement level?
IT"S OVER 9000!!!
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Im ah Firein Ma LAZOR BLAHHHHHHH

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how will she smash the scouter without fingers?

400332 images.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw1791-1322427921.png ...or hoof's which ever come first xD