I'm really liking the story so far, only a few grammatical errors that I've found (nothing that makes it hard to read). You said in an earlier comment that the first 5 chapters were written out (but needed work); do you have an ETA on those? Anyway, looking forward to the rest of Ashes story (definitely tracking).
200258 Weeeellll.... I'm guessing that some griffins do. It seems like Gilda gives a toothy grin in her episode, and they are half lion so it's possible.
And thank you!
200393 Curse you english language! And thank you again!
Yes, the first five chapters were originally written in a third person perspective, not finding this to my liking I have since endeavored to rewrite them, fourth should be up in an hour or so.
218254 You've had an issue with occasionally jumping into the third person perspective (just look for 'himself', and the like (I'm assuming these are where your editing missed a word or two)), but other than that I'm quite enjoying this so far.
I'm really liking the story so far, only a few grammatical errors that I've found (nothing that makes it hard to read).
You said in an earlier comment that the first 5 chapters were written out (but needed work); do you have an ETA on those?
Anyway, looking forward to the rest of Ashes story (definitely tracking).
200258
Weeeellll.... I'm guessing that some griffins do. It seems like Gilda gives a toothy grin in her episode, and they are half lion so it's possible.
And thank you!
200393
Curse you english language! And thank you again!
Yes, the first five chapters were originally written in a third person perspective, not finding this to my liking I have since endeavored to rewrite them, fourth should be up in an hour or so.
Awesome!! And I really didn't find any grammatical errors myself, but I wasn't really paying attention to that, I was too involved in the story.
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You've had an issue with occasionally jumping into the third person perspective (just look for 'himself', and the like (I'm assuming these are where your editing missed a word or two)), but other than that I'm quite enjoying this so far.